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Daoist_Foodie
Daoist_FoodieLv45yr
2019-08-07 18:24

Fellows readers should give this novel a try up to 50 chapters and decide on your own if this is worth your time. Don't let other reviews stop you from reading. Remember, each of us have their own preference. Just because low ratings from others doesn't mean you have the same taste as him. Anyways for my review, we have the MC which you'll find frustrating from the start. It was explained at later chapters as to why he acts like that. As for side characters, side kicks and mobs in ** Arc that you think will be forgotten, no they will not. Besides it was also explained as to why the MC can battle like that. The pacing of story is also good. Thumbs up for that. But it lacks hype. What do we want in apocalypse novel? It's thrill and hype that can make our heart badump badump. LOL 🤣🤣 Need more scenes that would make our emotions in roller coller since it's dark days of humanity.

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Daoist_Foodie
Daoist_FoodieLv4

'**' = first arc.

Exallion
ExallionAuthor

I see... Finally, someone gave a good suggestion. All I received these past days are people forcing their ideals as if they paid me to write this story for them. Well, the scenes you mentioned well get lesser and lesser in the future since the survivors will start to get accustomed to the apocalypse. Thanks a lot for liking my novel. :D

foicooljaockson
foicooljaocksonLv1

سف

Daoist_Foodie:'**' = first arc.
M_0_E
M_0_ELv4

Thx

NPC077
NPC077Lv4

Well said fellow daoist

DaoistRyPpsS
DaoistRyPpsSLv1

I will trust you fellow cultivator

Suk_min_Tak
Suk_min_TakLv3

but I don't like NTR

Ijebella_Ashton
Ijebella_AshtonLv2

me too

Suk_min_Tak:but I don't like NTR
Suk_min_Tak
Suk_min_TakLv3

oh

Ijebella_Ashton:me too
Chanranko_Dely
Chanranko_DelyLv2

🙄

Suk_min_Tak:oh
Lingchen_Ye
Lingchen_YeLv2

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Chanranko_Dely:🙄
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