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Fundayyy
FundayyyLv44yr
2019-12-13 12:29

The novel did have evrything to have a great plot, but the Author decides to go with the Harem route, evry time the MC safes someone realy important (fighting capabilities/important background or some super Power) you guess it.... it's a Girl/Women or even a loli, i don't even care over the deus ex machina to Safe the MC or his friends evry time **** hits the fan, but the first time the Author went full deus ex cause the MC was done for, it was mostly done so he could add another women to his harem, so if you like a novel like that enjoy....

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SavageGamer
SavageGamerLv14

Yikes thanks for the warning...Saved me a lot of time

silverfang55
silverfang55Lv14

Don't listen to that review he's a family man with wife and kids

SavageGamer:Yikes thanks for the warning...Saved me a lot of time
Ianism
IanismLv13

Read it, there's no harem

SavageGamer:Yikes thanks for the warning...Saved me a lot of time
Ianism
IanismLv13

Yeah, and pets too

silverfang55:Don't listen to that review he's a family man with wife and kids
Enzzi
EnzziLv4

Fck you read it before commenting about the story. You hypocrites judge the works of people while not reading it. Also wdym that it's harem, it's clearly not.

EnderPL
EnderPLLv6

Bro I’m on 250 chapter and he doesn’t even have a girlfriend. There is one love interest up till now at least.

MonarchOfSilence
MonarchOfSilenceLv5

If for you harem means having kids you have real problems...

Fundayyy
FundayyyLv4

Wtf i don’t know if the Author changed the plot, but at the time i left, he had the raped girl/op loli and sexy naked mother and remember another one that was good with the sword...so good for him if the Author moved away from the Classic harem BS, but he sure did use it at the time i left...

Fundayyy
FundayyyLv4

Btw: i hope his ratio of strong supporters/main cast is now 50/50 women and men now, or dosn’t need to use a deus ex save evry time he is in deep sh!t

Fundayyy
FundayyyLv4

Were did i lie in my post, did it or diden’t it all happen in the story, at the time i left ...

MonarchOfSilence:If for you harem means having kids you have real problems...
Fundayyy
FundayyyLv4

So every time he saves someone important/strong main cast it’s no longer a women up to chapter 250 really?? So it’s now a guy that was transformed in the underground or a little boy with op powers....

EnderPL:Bro I’m on 250 chapter and he doesn’t even have a girlfriend. There is one love interest up till now at least.
wts
wtsLv11

dude maybe your commenting on the wrong novel.. i mean wheres the harem??? g maybe you thought that thiss is god and devil world novel

Fundayyy:Were did i lie in my post, did it or diden’t it all happen in the story, at the time i left ...
Mack_an_Cheese
Mack_an_CheeseLv3

There is no harem... no harem tag and he is only surrounded by women it's not like he holds feelings for them and the girls don't hold feelings for him except from mei. The author has already explained this.

Everythingonurmind
EverythingonurmindLv3

thanks for letting everyone i can save time cause of it

MAZINO_NA
MAZINO_NALv2

Is MC risking himself for the girls? And is he cruel and indifferent to the girls around him and only uses them?

Everythingonurmind:thanks for letting everyone i can save time cause of it
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UncleDodger
UncleDodgerLv11

thank you for saving my time

Auspicious_69
Auspicious_69Lv3

came for comments like this and ive read several of them. so to all of them, thank you for the warning. harem sucks, especially if not well written and full of coincidences

InSC
InSCLv13

From the latest chapter, it's confirmed that this novel is a harem...

Enzzi:Fck you read it before commenting about the story. You hypocrites judge the works of people while not reading it. Also wdym that it's harem, it's clearly not.
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NotAHostage
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DISCLAIMER: I only made it to around chapter 20, the review is based on those chapters. Oh boy. This novel is absolutely horrendous. To start of, writing quality is a dumpster fire, there are tons of plot holes and inconsistencies which you cover up by saying, ‘Mc who has no real life experience and only stayed home watching anime until the story started made a backup plan to the ****ty plan he made in the first place’ for example, him letting the other gangsters run away and *past* the zombies the Mc attracted w/ his gunshot instead of back into the theater. What was the backup plan anyway? Something along the lines of ‘he had a backup plan for that anyway’ just doesn’t cut it. And don’t even get me started on him not destroying his wrist with his shotgun. He shot it ONE HANDED. a SHOTGUN. instead this kid who happened to be the Mc has pinpoint Accuracy and insane logical thinking. Now, the side characters. Ignoring that for some reason they’re all female except the poor shop workout without a name, it feels like even the ‘fleshed out’ ones are just cardboard cutouts. And why did you think TWO chapters of FILLER BACKSTORY would be a good idea? Nobody cares about this character and wasting time isn’t gonna help. And please nobody even say something like ‘hmph, you are simply low iq without patience, the novel gets better you absolute cabbage..’ I don’t care if it gets better, the beginning is what hooks your reader. I’m not wasting more time reading more of this poor excuse for a novel.

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