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FundayyyLv45yr
2019-12-13 04:29

The novel did have evrything to have a great plot, but the Author decides to go with the Harem route, evry time the MC safes someone realy important (fighting capabilities/important background or some super Power) you guess it.... it's a Girl/Women or even a loli, i don't even care over the deus ex machina to Safe the MC or his friends evry time **** hits the fan, but the first time the Author went full deus ex cause the MC was done for, it was mostly done so he could add another women to his harem, so if you like a novel like that enjoy....

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SavageGamerLv14

Yikes thanks for the warning...Saved me a lot of time

silverfang55Lv14

Don't listen to that review he's a family man with wife and kids

SavageGamer:Yikes thanks for the warning...Saved me a lot of time
IanismLv13

Read it, there's no harem

SavageGamer:Yikes thanks for the warning...Saved me a lot of time
IanismLv13

Yeah, and pets too

silverfang55:Don't listen to that review he's a family man with wife and kids
EnzziLv4

Fck you read it before commenting about the story. You hypocrites judge the works of people while not reading it. Also wdym that it's harem, it's clearly not.

EnderPLLv6

Bro I’m on 250 chapter and he doesn’t even have a girlfriend. There is one love interest up till now at least.

MonarchOfSilenceLv5

If for you harem means having kids you have real problems...

FundayyyLv4

Wtf i don’t know if the Author changed the plot, but at the time i left, he had the raped girl/op loli and sexy naked mother and remember another one that was good with the sword...so good for him if the Author moved away from the Classic harem BS, but he sure did use it at the time i left...

FundayyyLv4

Btw: i hope his ratio of strong supporters/main cast is now 50/50 women and men now, or dosn’t need to use a deus ex save evry time he is in deep sh!t

FundayyyLv4

Were did i lie in my post, did it or diden’t it all happen in the story, at the time i left ...

MonarchOfSilence:If for you harem means having kids you have real problems...
FundayyyLv4

So every time he saves someone important/strong main cast it’s no longer a women up to chapter 250 really?? So it’s now a guy that was transformed in the underground or a little boy with op powers....

EnderPL:Bro I’m on 250 chapter and he doesn’t even have a girlfriend. There is one love interest up till now at least.
wtsLv11

dude maybe your commenting on the wrong novel.. i mean wheres the harem??? g maybe you thought that thiss is god and devil world novel

Fundayyy:Were did i lie in my post, did it or diden’t it all happen in the story, at the time i left ...
Mack_an_CheeseLv3

There is no harem... no harem tag and he is only surrounded by women it's not like he holds feelings for them and the girls don't hold feelings for him except from mei. The author has already explained this.

EverythingonurmindLv4

thanks for letting everyone i can save time cause of it

MAZINO_NALv2

Is MC risking himself for the girls? And is he cruel and indifferent to the girls around him and only uses them?

Everythingonurmind:thanks for letting everyone i can save time cause of it
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UncleDodgerLv11

thank you for saving my time

Auspicious_69Lv3

came for comments like this and ive read several of them. so to all of them, thank you for the warning. harem sucks, especially if not well written and full of coincidences

InSCLv13

From the latest chapter, it's confirmed that this novel is a harem...

Enzzi:Fck you read it before commenting about the story. You hypocrites judge the works of people while not reading it. Also wdym that it's harem, it's clearly not.
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