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Exallion
ExallionAuthor6yr
2019-04-05 01:55

Hello everyone, Author here. This would be my first time to actually write a something so I want to thank those who wanted to read and those who had already gone through the current chapters. I'm not shameless enough to give my own writing a 5 star rating but I of course it still being a bit shameless giving this rating. Well, it's my own written story after all. As a newbie author I know that there is a lot that I needed to improve at but I guarantee that my concept in creating the whole background of the story to be quite interesting. Anyways, I would appreciate if you guys leave reviews or even criticize me for errors on my writing and things I needed to improve on. Again, thank you and have a nice read.

Mutagen

Exallion
4.5
1184 Chs

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FangMing
FangMingLv5

Tags?

6yr
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Heaveah
HeaveahLv5

Tags? Romance or harem?

6yr
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Exallion
ExallionAuthor

Well, I'm still undecided how the Romance would go since it won't covered too much but the chance of it being a harem is very low since the MC is not too fond of having one himself.

Heaveah:Tags? Romance or harem?
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HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5

Is the mc op good sir?

6yr
Exallion
ExallionAuthor

Hmmm. The MC has some unconventional skills and thinking but he is quite far from being OP for a while from the start of the outbreak... Yes! Just for a while from the start of the outbreak! Well, I can't say anything beyond that. :P

HansTheCool:Is the mc op good sir?
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HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5

Well thanks anyway

Exallion:Hmmm. The MC has some unconventional skills and thinking but he is quite far from being OP for a while from the start of the outbreak... Yes! Just for a while from the start of the outbreak! Well, I can't say anything beyond that. :P
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Denzel_theking
Denzel_thekingLv6

just dont have the mc being op only to have guys who are much more op than him coming from nowhere and the other thing I hate is the mc taking to long to get stronger

Exallion:Hmmm. The MC has some unconventional skills and thinking but he is quite far from being OP for a while from the start of the outbreak... Yes! Just for a while from the start of the outbreak! Well, I can't say anything beyond that. :P
6yr
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Denzel_theking
Denzel_thekingLv6

just dont have the mc being op only to have guys who are much more op than him coming from nowhere and the other thing I hate is the mc taking to long to get stronger I dont know how ur story is but I hope its good enough to make me stay around

Exallion:Hmmm. The MC has some unconventional skills and thinking but he is quite far from being OP for a while from the start of the outbreak... Yes! Just for a while from the start of the outbreak! Well, I can't say anything beyond that. :P
6yr
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Exallion
ExallionAuthor

I admit it is quite slow. I really want to say the reason why but it would spoil a main part in the story, so I can't. And for the part that he would encounter stronger because he became op, that would be by chance. I don't really control my characters too much so it might even happen that he would encounter some op character before he could even become one >.<

Denzel_theking:just dont have the mc being op only to have guys who are much more op than him coming from nowhere and the other thing I hate is the mc taking to long to get stronger I dont know how ur story is but I hope its good enough to make me stay around
6yr
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Denzel_theking
Denzel_thekingLv6

as long as it is done right I will continue to read it so I cant wait to read ur story later

Exallion:I admit it is quite slow. I really want to say the reason why but it would spoil a main part in the story, so I can't. And for the part that he would encounter stronger because he became op, that would be by chance. I don't really control my characters too much so it might even happen that he would encounter some op character before he could even become one >.<
6yr
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Rupp
RuppLv6

tags you thought

6yr
kai_en
kai_enLv4

Will there be some kind of romance added in ?

6yr
kai_en
kai_enLv4

Will there be some kind of romance added in ?

6yr
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Exallion
ExallionAuthor

yes, but pretty much minimal.

kai_en:Will there be some kind of romance added in ?
6yr
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kai_en
kai_enLv4

Ahh I see . Anyways look forward to the novel . Loving the chapters so far :) chap 1 was good . Good build up

Exallion:yes, but pretty much minimal.
6yr
Exallion
ExallionAuthor

thanks! Well, I'll just say that there are chapters that I haven't edited after chapter 8 so you won't be surprised if there was a sudden drop in grammar. My writing style was quite undecided that time.

kai_en:Ahh I see . Anyways look forward to the novel . Loving the chapters so far :) chap 1 was good . Good build up
6yr
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Zerax
ZeraxLv10

Author , maybe I know if this novel is going to be free or have to be unlock with SS after a certain chapter

5yr
krabion
krabionLv13

is there comedy or face slapping?

5yr
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Exallion
ExallionAuthor

comedy, a little. For face slapping, I don't know if making the enemies feel utter hopelessness and despair can be called one. >.<

5yr
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Rawr_Kitten
Rawr_KittenLv5

All i had to sdo was look at characters and not read the novel to know i wouldnt like it... mc saves useless baggage people in the end of the world scenario somehow ends up with a mother daughter couple and what appesrs to be more love interests who most likely have the iq of a rotton apple .. pampered princess types arnt worth saveing.. not inless your the bad guy and they are used for bedplay... otherwise useless baggage... if you got life made in a nor al socity yet still complain about it... then they will be the type to complain nonstop over everything when they are expected to walk and eat stale old food and have times of starvation... they arnt fit for any use but to be a pretty face and thats it... same for men who are pampered .. in a do or die situation its nut up or shut up and learn to double tap a mc who claims to have plans but doesnt actually have plans and a mentality of being a hero edge lord yet has no real understanding of who to save and who to let die

5yr
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