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ExallionAuthor5yr
2019-04-04 17:55

Hello everyone, Author here. This would be my first time to actually write a something so I want to thank those who wanted to read and those who had already gone through the current chapters. I'm not shameless enough to give my own writing a 5 star rating but I of course it still being a bit shameless giving this rating. Well, it's my own written story after all. As a newbie author I know that there is a lot that I needed to improve at but I guarantee that my concept in creating the whole background of the story to be quite interesting. Anyways, I would appreciate if you guys leave reviews or even criticize me for errors on my writing and things I needed to improve on. Again, thank you and have a nice read.

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Exallion
4.5
1183 Chs

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FangMingLv5

Tags?

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HeaveahLv5

Tags? Romance or harem?

5yr
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ExallionAuthor

Well, I'm still undecided how the Romance would go since it won't covered too much but the chance of it being a harem is very low since the MC is not too fond of having one himself.

Heaveah:Tags? Romance or harem?
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HansTheCoolLv5

Is the mc op good sir?

5yr
ExallionAuthor

Hmmm. The MC has some unconventional skills and thinking but he is quite far from being OP for a while from the start of the outbreak... Yes! Just for a while from the start of the outbreak! Well, I can't say anything beyond that. :P

HansTheCool:Is the mc op good sir?
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HansTheCoolLv5

Well thanks anyway

Exallion:Hmmm. The MC has some unconventional skills and thinking but he is quite far from being OP for a while from the start of the outbreak... Yes! Just for a while from the start of the outbreak! Well, I can't say anything beyond that. :P
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Denzel_thekingLv6

just dont have the mc being op only to have guys who are much more op than him coming from nowhere and the other thing I hate is the mc taking to long to get stronger

Exallion:Hmmm. The MC has some unconventional skills and thinking but he is quite far from being OP for a while from the start of the outbreak... Yes! Just for a while from the start of the outbreak! Well, I can't say anything beyond that. :P
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Denzel_thekingLv6

just dont have the mc being op only to have guys who are much more op than him coming from nowhere and the other thing I hate is the mc taking to long to get stronger I dont know how ur story is but I hope its good enough to make me stay around

Exallion:Hmmm. The MC has some unconventional skills and thinking but he is quite far from being OP for a while from the start of the outbreak... Yes! Just for a while from the start of the outbreak! Well, I can't say anything beyond that. :P
5yr
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ExallionAuthor

I admit it is quite slow. I really want to say the reason why but it would spoil a main part in the story, so I can't. And for the part that he would encounter stronger because he became op, that would be by chance. I don't really control my characters too much so it might even happen that he would encounter some op character before he could even become one >.<

Denzel_theking:just dont have the mc being op only to have guys who are much more op than him coming from nowhere and the other thing I hate is the mc taking to long to get stronger I dont know how ur story is but I hope its good enough to make me stay around
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Denzel_thekingLv6

as long as it is done right I will continue to read it so I cant wait to read ur story later

Exallion:I admit it is quite slow. I really want to say the reason why but it would spoil a main part in the story, so I can't. And for the part that he would encounter stronger because he became op, that would be by chance. I don't really control my characters too much so it might even happen that he would encounter some op character before he could even become one >.<
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RuppLv6

tags you thought

5yr
kai_enLv4

Will there be some kind of romance added in ?

5yr
kai_enLv4

Will there be some kind of romance added in ?

5yr
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ExallionAuthor

yes, but pretty much minimal.

kai_en:Will there be some kind of romance added in ?
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kai_enLv4

Ahh I see . Anyways look forward to the novel . Loving the chapters so far :) chap 1 was good . Good build up

Exallion:yes, but pretty much minimal.
5yr
ExallionAuthor

thanks! Well, I'll just say that there are chapters that I haven't edited after chapter 8 so you won't be surprised if there was a sudden drop in grammar. My writing style was quite undecided that time.

kai_en:Ahh I see . Anyways look forward to the novel . Loving the chapters so far :) chap 1 was good . Good build up
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ZeraxLv10

Author , maybe I know if this novel is going to be free or have to be unlock with SS after a certain chapter

5yr
krabionLv13

is there comedy or face slapping?

5yr
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ExallionAuthor

comedy, a little. For face slapping, I don't know if making the enemies feel utter hopelessness and despair can be called one. >.<

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Rawr_KittenLv5

All i had to sdo was look at characters and not read the novel to know i wouldnt like it... mc saves useless baggage people in the end of the world scenario somehow ends up with a mother daughter couple and what appesrs to be more love interests who most likely have the iq of a rotton apple .. pampered princess types arnt worth saveing.. not inless your the bad guy and they are used for bedplay... otherwise useless baggage... if you got life made in a nor al socity yet still complain about it... then they will be the type to complain nonstop over everything when they are expected to walk and eat stale old food and have times of starvation... they arnt fit for any use but to be a pretty face and thats it... same for men who are pampered .. in a do or die situation its nut up or shut up and learn to double tap a mc who claims to have plans but doesnt actually have plans and a mentality of being a hero edge lord yet has no real understanding of who to save and who to let die

5yr
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Things why this novel is at top of my apocalypse genre novel list. 1. The world background is really detailed and logically explained, the name mutagen really is well suited. 2. Anti-hero Protagonist who only helps people when he wants something out of it, it's convenient or just plain easy for him. 3. Updates every day with a new chapter. 4. The type of evolution that the zombies and mutants follow is very unique and has a good variety to them. 5. The MC makes rational decisions. And always tries to see a way to benefit himself or his team. 6. Loved the power which the MC possesses in the apocalypse, never seen it before in apocalypse novel. Overall it's an amazing apocalypse novel and it will be a great experience for all. It just has some Gore and scenes of mature content so read at your own discretion. Author really impressed with the novel, the quality of the chapters, and the one chapter per day update is really appreciated. Thanks for writing this novel and keep up the great work, i appreciate it. 😁👍

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Fellows readers should give this novel a try up to 50 chapters and decide on your own if this is worth your time. Don't let other reviews stop you from reading. Remember, each of us have their own preference. Just because low ratings from others doesn't mean you have the same taste as him. Anyways for my review, we have the MC which you'll find frustrating from the start. It was explained at later chapters as to why he acts like that. As for side characters, side kicks and mobs in ** Arc that you think will be forgotten, no they will not. Besides it was also explained as to why the MC can battle like that. The pacing of story is also good. Thumbs up for that. But it lacks hype. What do we want in apocalypse novel? It's thrill and hype that can make our heart badump badump. LOL 🤣🤣 Need more scenes that would make our emotions in roller coller since it's dark days of humanity.

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AlmightyLord5thLv4

This story is nearly below average in everything. The grammar is abysmal, the characters aren't fleshed out ( but theirs only 25 as im currently writing this review, so it may change), and everything else seems *******ish. And listen guy, it's okay if you want to include dark themes like r@pe into your story but it has to make sense. Why after only 30 minutes of an apocalypse is rape already happening? Literally everyone would be trying to procure a safe haven and some supplies, nobody would even have the feckin time. The character interactions are cringy and the MC is already acting like an edge boi. Slow your roll man, take a deep breath and replan your story.

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FundayyyLv4

The novel did have evrything to have a great plot, but the Author decides to go with the Harem route, evry time the MC safes someone realy important (fighting capabilities/important background or some super Power) you guess it.... it's a Girl/Women or even a loli, i don't even care over the deus ex machina to Safe the MC or his friends evry time **** hits the fan, but the first time the Author went full deus ex cause the MC was done for, it was mostly done so he could add another women to his harem, so if you like a novel like that enjoy....

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CuernosssLv3

- Harem - Deus Ex Machina to get one more Harem member...wrote a longer review but it got deleted... - MC thinks he is not a hero but safes evry damsel in distress...endangers his life for people he knew for 5 or 10 minutes

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NotAHostageLv12

DISCLAIMER: I only made it to around chapter 20, the review is based on those chapters. Oh boy. This novel is absolutely horrendous. To start of, writing quality is a dumpster fire, there are tons of plot holes and inconsistencies which you cover up by saying, ‘Mc who has no real life experience and only stayed home watching anime until the story started made a backup plan to the ****ty plan he made in the first place’ for example, him letting the other gangsters run away and *past* the zombies the Mc attracted w/ his gunshot instead of back into the theater. What was the backup plan anyway? Something along the lines of ‘he had a backup plan for that anyway’ just doesn’t cut it. And don’t even get me started on him not destroying his wrist with his shotgun. He shot it ONE HANDED. a SHOTGUN. instead this kid who happened to be the Mc has pinpoint Accuracy and insane logical thinking. Now, the side characters. Ignoring that for some reason they’re all female except the poor shop workout without a name, it feels like even the ‘fleshed out’ ones are just cardboard cutouts. And why did you think TWO chapters of FILLER BACKSTORY would be a good idea? Nobody cares about this character and wasting time isn’t gonna help. And please nobody even say something like ‘hmph, you are simply low iq without patience, the novel gets better you absolute cabbage..’ I don’t care if it gets better, the beginning is what hooks your reader. I’m not wasting more time reading more of this poor excuse for a novel.

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NomorevtrLv6

A cliche MC with a Harem, i realy wanted to like this, but after the MC received some super powers to add one more Girl (and survive) to his harem i had enough!

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SavageGamerLv14

To many fake 5 star reviews for another harem garbage story.Waste of time. ........................,........................... ....... .....

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