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DyingGod
DyingGodLv125yr
2019-01-10 16:43

It was okay until we find out that the ML is possibly behind the FL murder or is covering it up for someone.... not love. Plus the ML is practically a molester, author tries to point out that FL is an ***** already so its okay but she is technically oblivious to love and physical contact, so does that make it okay for him to do whatever he wants to her. If a girl pushes you away or says no then its wrong but he keeps going saying the same excuses molesters and rapists say.

His Genius Wife is a Superstar

ArriaCross
4.7
1581 Chs

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FakeMask
FakeMaskLv4

I think that the one that want to murder the FL is the Fans, as it say that the ML want to have the least amount of connection as possible with them. Which is what the ML trying to hid from the FL until he had the nerves to tell the FL.

5yr
saharapiani
saharapianiLv3

...............................

5yr
YueYingShu
YueYingShuLv4

Haven’t you read? Such a person commenting as if he/she knows 🙄🙄

5yr
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ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5

not sure if you guy have watch this video or not, can give more idea about how "not" to write love interests here https://***.youtube.com/watch?v=NgZyhH35hM4

5yr
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098890
098890Lv4

I'm sorry but what I understand in your review is that, when someone tells you to give up on a certain object, person, etc, then you'll just give up

5yr
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ArtistaFeel
ArtistaFeelLv4

A brand new novel awaits your support Give it a try Lyricist: Her Revenge

5yr
Miriallia
MirialliaLv11

So if something thatvisnt given can be taken by force? Go to your nearest super market and ask if you can have a trolley full of goods free of charge. Then see if people think its okay to just take it by force.

098890:I'm sorry but what I understand in your review is that, when someone tells you to give up on a certain object, person, etc, then you'll just give up
5yr
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Miriallia
MirialliaLv11

So if something thatvisnt given can be taken by force? Go to your nearest super market and ask if you can have a trolley full of goods free of charge. Then see if people think its okay to just take it by force.

098890:I'm sorry but what I understand in your review is that, when someone tells you to give up on a certain object, person, etc, then you'll just give up
5yr
098890
098890Lv4

Well I'm talking about something else though... I'm really sorry if you misunderstood my comment. Laziness just suddenly hit me while writing the comment so I didn't finish it. I'm really sorry.

Miriallia:So if something thatvisnt given can be taken by force? Go to your nearest super market and ask if you can have a trolley full of goods free of charge. Then see if people think its okay to just take it by force.
5yr
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

that's rubbish excuse, character development is built from when he was young for example 14-15, here they are adults and you say need character development? rubbish

098890:Well I'm talking about something else though... I'm really sorry if you misunderstood my comment. Laziness just suddenly hit me while writing the comment so I didn't finish it. I'm really sorry.
2yr
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Ghaneza
GhanezaLv14

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AJZHEN
AJZHENLv14

I recommend this book to everyone who loves to read about romance, suspense, reincarnation, etc... Basically what I'm saying is that this book has it all. If you are not reading it yet, then your missing out big time. Join the millions of readers that had been reading this wonderful book. Go! Go! Go! "Idol" My favorite writer, and I'm proud of it... 😍😍😍😍😍😍💝💝💝💝💝💝AJZHEN

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the_sexy_red_cat
the_sexy_red_catLv10

To all you guys that say that the FL turned weak when the ML showed up. U r wrong... it was like 3-2 chapters then she comes back and stars kicking as.s again. Thru the whole story the FL is independent. I don't find it weak to fall in love. She never becomes weak and unindependent! The story goes thru a lot physiology and how the FL feels and it gives it a real deap and if you say that the characters are flat it's only because you stopped reading as soon as they appered! If u r just gonna hate then just go! No one wants you here! Give constructiv criticism not hate! 😤

5yr
_Hailuo_
_Hailuo_Lv5

Honestly words cannot describe my disappointment when I was getting really hooked onto this book and then realised there were only 39 chapters so far. Whether if it was the storyline or the ****** creation of a character; everything was flawlessly put together. Not to mention that this was the writers first Webnovel work! It has impressed me so much and I am really looking forward to future updates. 😍❤️ This is a definite 10 out of 10 for me❗️❤️

5yr
MeowMiao
MeowMiaoLv5

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5yr
S1eepym00n
S1eepym00nLv11

I love this story!💕I got hooked onto this story from the description and the first chapter. I hope that the author will continue on with this story till the end. I am looking forward towards the future chapters that is going to come out. I cannot wait. 😆 Thank you, author for bringing this story to life and for your hard work.😊

5yr
tmk_ing
tmk_ingLv12

Nope, I’m done. The first chapter was beautiful. Everything else that followed just made it be like all the other trash and filth on webnovel. Your characters are not well developed; especially the male lead. I don’t know how many times I have said it, too many to count and I simply don’t want to repeat myself for the nth time. I was hoping for MC to be a strong character considering her background but she can’t even say no to his ‘advances’. Grow a damn backbone! Every time male lead enters the scene he only thinks with his d1(k and his inappropriate advances are too rushed for my taste. Maybe you’ve never experienced love, the overwhelming sense of fluff and happiness from being in love. But whatever the case, you don’t seem to know it. As for pacing...it’s nonexistent. Love the first chapter. Hate everything else. I don’t recommend this for anyone really. The first chapter sure but not worth it for the following chapters. If you’re in for the romance, you’ve lucked out cause there’s simply none in this story. It literally goes from male lead hates MC and covers up her murder to male lead grabbing her and having his way with her all in two chapters. That’s not what I call a relationship, that’s what I call rape. So all in all, male lead covers up her murder and then pretty much rapes her later. I’ll like to say I’m a decent human being so this is not my cup of tea. I came for the musical aspect but all I get was male lead taking advantage of MC so nope. Done.

5yr
ShanRai
ShanRaiLv5

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5yr
ionbvery
ionbveryLv2

First I like the story but then came the male mc. Wow he is super duper possessive of the female mc. The female mc is clueless of love which I understand if you read the backstory. But god damn she fall love to the possessive male mc fast. He basically force and manipulate her so she can fall in love to her. If you think about is stupid. Love take time. The male mc is stupid too, he falls in love to her hard and fast. Unbelievably. I hate the male mc because he is one of the reason that she died(original iris long). Then he loves her when he saw the new iris long. The story is really predictable and cliché. You can read the first chapter and last chapter and you will understand the whole story.

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