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tmk_ing
tmk_ingLv136yr
2019-01-11 14:10

Nope, I’m done. The first chapter was beautiful. Everything else that followed just made it be like all the other trash and filth on webnovel. Your characters are not well developed; especially the male lead. I don’t know how many times I have said it, too many to count and I simply don’t want to repeat myself for the nth time. I was hoping for MC to be a strong character considering her background but she can’t even say no to his ‘advances’. Grow a damn backbone! Every time male lead enters the scene he only thinks with his d1(k and his inappropriate advances are too rushed for my taste. Maybe you’ve never experienced love, the overwhelming sense of fluff and happiness from being in love. But whatever the case, you don’t seem to know it. As for pacing...it’s nonexistent. Love the first chapter. Hate everything else. I don’t recommend this for anyone really. The first chapter sure but not worth it for the following chapters. If you’re in for the romance, you’ve lucked out cause there’s simply none in this story. It literally goes from male lead hates MC and covers up her murder to male lead grabbing her and having his way with her all in two chapters. That’s not what I call a relationship, that’s what I call rape. So all in all, male lead covers up her murder and then pretty much rapes her later. I’ll like to say I’m a decent human being so this is not my cup of tea. I came for the musical aspect but all I get was male lead taking advantage of MC so nope. Done.

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bedjosutiyo
bedjosutiyoLv3

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baniyan9i
baniyan9iLv3

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nanaalya
nanaalyaLv3

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YueYingShu
YueYingShuLv4

Please read again and make an inference

erikasaku
erikasakuLv10

I agree you should go back and read again Ugh I’m tired of commenting how people are misleading others about this novel... There is NO rape - I was rape so I know that. We still don’t know what happen at her accident so no comments on that part. He does think a lot with is d* but doesn’t every men? And that you call something rape doesn’t mean its rape please go and buy a dictionary

YueYingShu:Please read again and make an inference
tmk_ing
tmk_ingLv13

It is rape. She’s a *****, sheltered girl who is experiencing sexual arousal for the very first time because she couldn’t afford to in her first life. She’s like an early **** who is first learning about ***. The only thing she understands from all this is that whatever he’s doing to her is making her body feel good. So clearly he is taking advantage of her. Or are you saying this is not him taking advantage of her?? Because if you are, then you are one disgust individual and I have to question how your parents ever raised you to be like this. We can all agree he is very. clearly. taking advantage of her. Next, in regards to the accident. We know he didn’t cause the accident but he did cover it up. It has been said a few times already. If you reread the earlier chapters you’ll see it. However, just because he wasn’t the mastermind behind the accident doesn’t mean he’s innocent. Ever heard of ‘accessory after the fact’? That makes him guilty. Thirdly, the only time he wasn’t thinking or doing anything with his d1(k was when the author first introduced him in the story. The author painted him as a cold, aloof, strict business man yet in the next chapter you see him randomly grabbing her and kissing her. Following that, he calls her down from her penthouse and grinds on her in his car. Next, he invites himself into her house and literally...must I continue? In such a short span of a few chapters author has clearly lost sight of his characters. And yeah, he’s a male so he thinks with his d1(k, so do every other male lead on webnovel but never to this extent.

erikasaku:I agree you should go back and read again Ugh I’m tired of commenting how people are misleading others about this novel... There is NO rape - I was rape so I know that. We still don’t know what happen at her accident so no comments on that part. He does think a lot with is d* but doesn’t every men? And that you call something rape doesn’t mean its rape please go and buy a dictionary
tmk_ing
tmk_ingLv13

Also, the only reason why you are defending him is because he’s the male lead. If he had been the antagonist then I’m sure you would have screamed bloody murder. But to me, it doesn’t matter if he’s the male lead or the villain or whatever. I call them like I see them. What is right is naturally right, and what is wrong is naturally wrong. Even a kid knows right from wrong. Just because he’s the male lead doesn’t excuse his behavior.

erikasaku:I agree you should go back and read again Ugh I’m tired of commenting how people are misleading others about this novel... There is NO rape - I was rape so I know that. We still don’t know what happen at her accident so no comments on that part. He does think a lot with is d* but doesn’t every men? And that you call something rape doesn’t mean its rape please go and buy a dictionary
erikasaku
erikasakuLv10

You are wrong in that part I have read novel were I hated the ML. You just don’t understand that he didn’t rape her, maybe you should go and read an actual novel we’re it has rape and see the difference. Yes even kids can see right from wrong. But we are not kids we have to think more logical to see that it’s not rape. Yes it was wrong from him to moleste her but nothing else. We already have to see past this, if it was the opposite were the MC was doing this to the ML no one would be commenting about rape.

tmk_ing:Also, the only reason why you are defending him is because he’s the male lead. If he had been the antagonist then I’m sure you would have screamed bloody murder. But to me, it doesn’t matter if he’s the male lead or the villain or whatever. I call them like I see them. What is right is naturally right, and what is wrong is naturally wrong. Even a kid knows right from wrong. Just because he’s the male lead doesn’t excuse his behavior.
tmk_ing
tmk_ingLv13

So you’re here debating if this was rape or not? Really? Fine. If we were to strictly go by the very definition of rape then no, you are right. It is not rape. Everything must be white and black to you then and this defeats the whole purpose of you proclaiming that you’re not a kid. Because only kids view an issue as black and white when there is much more.

erikasaku:You are wrong in that part I have read novel were I hated the ML. You just don’t understand that he didn’t rape her, maybe you should go and read an actual novel we’re it has rape and see the difference. Yes even kids can see right from wrong. But we are not kids we have to think more logical to see that it’s not rape. Yes it was wrong from him to moleste her but nothing else. We already have to see past this, if it was the opposite were the MC was doing this to the ML no one would be commenting about rape.
erikasaku
erikasakuLv10

Actually you were the one who put everything in black and white. You know what just don’t watch game of thrones cause that does have rape and seems like you cant handle it.

tmk_ing:So you’re here debating if this was rape or not? Really? Fine. If we were to strictly go by the very definition of rape then no, you are right. It is not rape. Everything must be white and black to you then and this defeats the whole purpose of you proclaiming that you’re not a kid. Because only kids view an issue as black and white when there is much more.
Miriallia
MirialliaLv11

Its sexual assault, still a crime. It sends a signal that he doesnt respect her as a person and that she exists soley for him to play with.

erikasaku:Actually you were the one who put everything in black and white. You know what just don’t watch game of thrones cause that does have rape and seems like you cant handle it.
erikasaku
erikasakuLv10

I agree with you it’s sexual assault, but not rape. Rape is such a strong word that people shouldn’t use so lightly. look I was rape at the age of 4 and I still remember every single detail of that day. This is the reason why I hate when people use the word rape so thoughtless.

Miriallia:Its sexual assault, still a crime. It sends a signal that he doesnt respect her as a person and that she exists soley for him to play with.
LilithRaven
LilithRavenLv10

so you admit is sexual assault AND STILL DEFENDING THE ML!!!! think with your head not what’s between your legs.

erikasaku:I agree with you it’s sexual assault, but not rape. Rape is such a strong word that people shouldn’t use so lightly. look I was rape at the age of 4 and I still remember every single detail of that day. This is the reason why I hate when people use the word rape so thoughtless.
erikasaku
erikasakuLv10

Did you read the book? If not don’t comment. I do agree it’s but it’s a novel not real there is even worse think in other novels in here, he only kiss her same as other novels but that was the only time After that what people considere “rape” it was something both of them wanted to do And I don’t think with my LEGS since I was rape I’m so scare of ***. I can’t even kiss Do you think I could thinking with my LEGS?

LilithRaven:so you admit is sexual assault AND STILL DEFENDING THE ML!!!! think with your head not what’s between your legs.
LilithRaven
LilithRavenLv10

I will comment no matter what you say, also don’t use the victim card since defend this Novel despite what the ML does.

erikasaku:Did you read the book? If not don’t comment. I do agree it’s but it’s a novel not real there is even worse think in other novels in here, he only kiss her same as other novels but that was the only time After that what people considere “rape” it was something both of them wanted to do And I don’t think with my LEGS since I was rape I’m so scare of ***. I can’t even kiss Do you think I could thinking with my LEGS?
wendyjoy
wendyjoyLv13

me too please more update pls

cielo93
cielo93Lv5

Bueno no entiendo la protagonista quiere ser libre en esta nueva vida y termina enjaulada con un protagonista posesivo y donde quedo su yo quiero ser libre

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WindReader
WindReaderLv6

I agree with you I feel the MC is out of character after meet the ML. It's funny someone who never understand love and always alone suddenly just fine get snu snu by the ML... ussually this kind of character will reject other... until the ML make the MC feel the warm and good with ML character well I mean comfortable.

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