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the_sexy_red_cat
the_sexy_red_catLv105yr
2019-05-06 19:51

To all you guys that say that the FL turned weak when the ML showed up. U r wrong... it was like 3-2 chapters then she comes back and stars kicking as.s again. Thru the whole story the FL is independent. I don't find it weak to fall in love. She never becomes weak and unindependent! The story goes thru a lot physiology and how the FL feels and it gives it a real deap and if you say that the characters are flat it's only because you stopped reading as soon as they appered! If u r just gonna hate then just go! No one wants you here! Give constructiv criticism not hate! 😤

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ArriaCross
ArriaCrossAuthor

Thank you very much! I appreciate it.

swiftblay
swiftblayLv12

Nice

HanaNe83890253
HanaNe83890253Lv3

Indeed

LazyGlasses
LazyGlassesLv3

Up

Samaya_Daker
Samaya_DakerLv12

Agreed

Phoenixwunin
PhoenixwuninLv4

I am at Chapter 83 right now. However I can't help thinking that the female lead has indeed become a whole lot weaker after the male lead appear. This novel hooked me since the first chapter because of how badass the female lead was. I hope your review / comment here is true. Really miss the badass vibe of the female lead from earlier chapter. I'll continue reading this novel and see how it goes.

Phoenixwunin
PhoenixwuninLv4

I take back my previous comment about how Iris / female main character is becoming more dependent on the male lead. THAT WOMAN IS A TOTAL BADASS. I'm up to the latest chapter and I got to say this, this novel is awesome.

William_Aguilar
William_AguilarLv2

👏👏👏Weak? She need time to heal and learn more about her new life. It was just a buildup and growth period for her.

Brian_Fisher
Brian_FisherLv3

Really? The first time he says he is staying there he groapes her and fucks her without consent

inhumane
inhumaneLv3

Miss red cat who are you referring FL and ml my iq of understanding and remembering names is low

mayettenavarro
mayettenavarroLv13

Right it's your loss not ours i love this story gogogo ms.arriacross love you....

GrayCEri
GrayCEriLv4

Author. Have you stopped writing????. I want to know.......... Lol. I miss this book.

GrayCEri
GrayCEriLv4

Author. Have you stopped writing????. I want to know.......... Lol. I miss this book.

GrayCEri
GrayCEriLv4

Author. Have you stopped writing????. I want to know.......... Lol. I miss this book.

Sumi3676
Sumi3676Lv4

Please update soon we’re excited

Daoist187096
Daoist187096Lv1

👏👏👏👏

Phoenixwunin:I take back my previous comment about how Iris / female main character is becoming more dependent on the male lead. THAT WOMAN IS A TOTAL BADASS. I'm up to the latest chapter and I got to say this, this novel is awesome.
Torkop_Eteragent
Torkop_EteragentLv1

Noice

Torkop_Eteragent
Torkop_EteragentLv1

Noice

blissxfull
blissxfullLv12

True

Eun_5285
Eun_5285Lv3

It's nice

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tmk_ing
tmk_ingLv13

Nope, I’m done. The first chapter was beautiful. Everything else that followed just made it be like all the other trash and filth on webnovel. Your characters are not well developed; especially the male lead. I don’t know how many times I have said it, too many to count and I simply don’t want to repeat myself for the nth time. I was hoping for MC to be a strong character considering her background but she can’t even say no to his ‘advances’. Grow a damn backbone! Every time male lead enters the scene he only thinks with his d1(k and his inappropriate advances are too rushed for my taste. Maybe you’ve never experienced love, the overwhelming sense of fluff and happiness from being in love. But whatever the case, you don’t seem to know it. As for pacing...it’s nonexistent. Love the first chapter. Hate everything else. I don’t recommend this for anyone really. The first chapter sure but not worth it for the following chapters. If you’re in for the romance, you’ve lucked out cause there’s simply none in this story. It literally goes from male lead hates MC and covers up her murder to male lead grabbing her and having his way with her all in two chapters. That’s not what I call a relationship, that’s what I call rape. So all in all, male lead covers up her murder and then pretty much rapes her later. I’ll like to say I’m a decent human being so this is not my cup of tea. I came for the musical aspect but all I get was male lead taking advantage of MC so nope. Done.

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