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ionbveryLv25yr
2019-01-14 03:17

First I like the story but then came the male mc. Wow he is super duper possessive of the female mc. The female mc is clueless of love which I understand if you read the backstory. But god damn she fall love to the possessive male mc fast. He basically force and manipulate her so she can fall in love to her. If you think about is stupid. Love take time. The male mc is stupid too, he falls in love to her hard and fast. Unbelievably. I hate the male mc because he is one of the reason that she died(original iris long). Then he loves her when he saw the new iris long. The story is really predictable and cliché. You can read the first chapter and last chapter and you will understand the whole story.

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bulany
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:)

wendyjoy
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agree

Moranmoran
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🙌

Moranmoran
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Maisa_Pe
Maisa_PeLv3

Im so happy

A_ria
A_riaLv4

First of all, you can't manipulate someone into falling in love, it's something that happens with your subconscious consent... Secondly, he didn't kill her, he knew it was Fan Luo who cut the brakes of her car, but he was protecting her because he thought his brother loves her and she's his fiancee, we all know the original Iris was b*tchy, so he guessed she would make a scene if she found out, he was simply protecting his family, but now he feels guilty cause he misjudged her and he's trying really hard to get her to fall for him before he tells her because he's afraid to loose her. This novel is fictional, he was intrigued by her mysteriousness and wanted to get to know her, that's when he started falling in love with her, I don't think falling in love with someone after almost a year of knowing each other, I've read books were they fell in love after knowing each other for a month, so trust me when I say their feelings aren't rushed. Thirdly, the MC isn't weak, she's actually really far from weak, the fact that rebuilt her career from it's originally trashy stage to where she is now based on her own skills and without having to use the ML's name is proof enough that she isn't weak. This story is not and will never be one of the books I would tag as cliché because it isn't, there is no backstabbing, overly jealous, b*tchy ex bestfriend or sister or cousin, there is no cheating ex boyfriend who thinks the MC's world revolves around him, there is no evil step-mom, no brainless father and no rapist of an ML.

Alice_Maren
Alice_MarenLv1

A história é bem legal, mais realmente não podemos nos esquecer desses pontos. E além disso, eu acho Eveline ingrata e ingrata, não sei cê ela ajudou Nikolai depois, mais gente?? Ela basicamente esqueceu suas raízes, não importa cê ela agora é Íris Long até porquê antes de ser Íris, ela foi Eveline, ela só é brilhante como Íris Long porquê aprendeu como Eveline. E como assim a mente dela não pesa pela morte dos pais ou pela queda da facção que seus antepassados criaram lentamente e com muito esforço? Ela só lembra da mãe como ruim e ruim, mais quem aqui não lembra que tinha uma regra da máfia deles que os familiares que não contribuírem com alguma coisa na máfia são mortos ou jogados pra rua? Eveline viveu bem e bem como Eveline e como filha de seus pais, acho ela ingrata e ingrata. Não tenho nenhuma crítica, acho que esses pontos fortalecem mais o livro e deixa ele mais importante e Liwei, merda man, você é o pior. Lu Zihao ou Nikolai você é 10/1000 apesar de seus erros.

Melted_Ore
Melted_OreLv11

I don't know about everything you just said but I would like to correct one thing. People could actually be manipulated into falling in love. Take grooming for example, the minor is manipulated into thinking that the manipulator cares about him/her and so they 'fall in love.' Showing care, being there for someone, buying them gifts, all these could be done by people in love but a person who doesn't love you can use this same method to trick you into loving them. The ill intent behind their actions fuel their manipulation.

A_ria:First of all, you can't manipulate someone into falling in love, it's something that happens with your subconscious consent... Secondly, he didn't kill her, he knew it was Fan Luo who cut the brakes of her car, but he was protecting her because he thought his brother loves her and she's his fiancee, we all know the original Iris was b*tchy, so he guessed she would make a scene if she found out, he was simply protecting his family, but now he feels guilty cause he misjudged her and he's trying really hard to get her to fall for him before he tells her because he's afraid to loose her. This novel is fictional, he was intrigued by her mysteriousness and wanted to get to know her, that's when he started falling in love with her, I don't think falling in love with someone after almost a year of knowing each other, I've read books were they fell in love after knowing each other for a month, so trust me when I say their feelings aren't rushed. Thirdly, the MC isn't weak, she's actually really far from weak, the fact that rebuilt her career from it's originally trashy stage to where she is now based on her own skills and without having to use the ML's name is proof enough that she isn't weak. This story is not and will never be one of the books I would tag as cliché because it isn't, there is no backstabbing, overly jealous, b*tchy ex bestfriend or sister or cousin, there is no cheating ex boyfriend who thinks the MC's world revolves around him, there is no evil step-mom, no brainless father and no rapist of an ML.
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Nope, I’m done. The first chapter was beautiful. Everything else that followed just made it be like all the other trash and filth on webnovel. Your characters are not well developed; especially the male lead. I don’t know how many times I have said it, too many to count and I simply don’t want to repeat myself for the nth time. I was hoping for MC to be a strong character considering her background but she can’t even say no to his ‘advances’. Grow a damn backbone! Every time male lead enters the scene he only thinks with his d1(k and his inappropriate advances are too rushed for my taste. Maybe you’ve never experienced love, the overwhelming sense of fluff and happiness from being in love. But whatever the case, you don’t seem to know it. As for pacing...it’s nonexistent. Love the first chapter. Hate everything else. I don’t recommend this for anyone really. The first chapter sure but not worth it for the following chapters. If you’re in for the romance, you’ve lucked out cause there’s simply none in this story. It literally goes from male lead hates MC and covers up her murder to male lead grabbing her and having his way with her all in two chapters. That’s not what I call a relationship, that’s what I call rape. So all in all, male lead covers up her murder and then pretty much rapes her later. I’ll like to say I’m a decent human being so this is not my cup of tea. I came for the musical aspect but all I get was male lead taking advantage of MC so nope. Done.

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