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ShanRai
ShanRaiLv56yr
2019-01-09 16:14

I am starting to feel bored of FMC being so gullible into having *** ch 46. She had mature aura and behaviour? You must be pulling my leg. Seriously you make the story good and FMC was developing well and now all of a sudden SEX is this easy to achieve for the MC and FMC is into ***. If this **** goes on again and again, I will just drop this Novel. So far this story is like I am reading mixture of My Cold and Elegant CEO Wife mixed with Hidden Marriage.. and Another FMC hacking Mr.CEO spoil me 100. Too much cringe in this novel. The story quality drops so fast. Fore Play , softcore lame *** and childish lame characters. MC forces on to FMC (RAPE) And she is there like mentally challenged person. This Novel showed Great Potential but the author is out of ideas on how to best copy from other novels. FAIL NOVEL!

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mdin
mdinLv3

😊

sutejoput
sutejoputLv3

:)

KhaylaT
KhaylaTLv3

..........................

YueYingShu
YueYingShuLv4

Looov! Haven’t you heard of LOOOVE?

lezij
lezijLv10

👍

FickleGodEmperor
FickleGodEmperorLv4

Lol. So true. Im a male and i never read a ML this unbelievable!! What's up with this ML. It's very obvious that he came out from a girl's fantasies. Lmao

WindReader
WindReaderLv6

I'm girl but I think this novel is get more worst and unrelatable... I mean the mc is cold character and smart but just get heart trobing the first time meet the ML? I Feel is actually not romance novel but smut novel... there are no step by step how the feeling of mc and ml fall in love and feel cringe .... more like step by step get snu snu moment 😔😔😔

FickleGodEmperor:Lol. So true. Im a male and i never read a ML this unbelievable!! What's up with this ML. It's very obvious that he came out from a girl's fantasies. Lmao
iWasDamned
iWasDamnedLv5

im glad im not the only one who felt that the relationship is just freaking weird and off n that the ml is completly ridiculous and just kept getting more ridiculous..i don't feel there chemistry at all she can have any guy feel her up and make her feel good it doesn't have to be this a$$hole..n the fl ..instead of being sexual ignorant she comes off more mentally handicapped...how the hell doesn't she feel anything off with what the ml does to her and just goes with it cuz it feels good..look up stuff on the internet..masturbate ..buy a vibrator..u don't need that d-bag to feel good

_NiIl_Nayilla_
_NiIl_Nayilla_Lv12

i'm currently on chapter 160, and they both still virgins. I do agree that the relationship started horribly, but they are chsnging, and maturing. It's what they call 'character development'

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Ghaneza
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MeowMiao
MeowMiaoLv5
tmk_ing
tmk_ingLv13

Nope, I’m done. The first chapter was beautiful. Everything else that followed just made it be like all the other trash and filth on webnovel. Your characters are not well developed; especially the male lead. I don’t know how many times I have said it, too many to count and I simply don’t want to repeat myself for the nth time. I was hoping for MC to be a strong character considering her background but she can’t even say no to his ‘advances’. Grow a damn backbone! Every time male lead enters the scene he only thinks with his d1(k and his inappropriate advances are too rushed for my taste. Maybe you’ve never experienced love, the overwhelming sense of fluff and happiness from being in love. But whatever the case, you don’t seem to know it. As for pacing...it’s nonexistent. Love the first chapter. Hate everything else. I don’t recommend this for anyone really. The first chapter sure but not worth it for the following chapters. If you’re in for the romance, you’ve lucked out cause there’s simply none in this story. It literally goes from male lead hates MC and covers up her murder to male lead grabbing her and having his way with her all in two chapters. That’s not what I call a relationship, that’s what I call rape. So all in all, male lead covers up her murder and then pretty much rapes her later. I’ll like to say I’m a decent human being so this is not my cup of tea. I came for the musical aspect but all I get was male lead taking advantage of MC so nope. Done.

DyingGod
DyingGodLv12
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