This novel started out great, but the author purposefully sabotaged it with overused and frustratingly annoying cliches. I won’t say how exactly because I don’t like to spoil, but at around chapter 100, the author introduced a plot that essentially made all of the character development that came before it useless. That’s over 100 chapters of tedious character development that went down the drain. What a waste of time, unless you’re a masochist who likes being trolled
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im in chapter 300 and it really is waste of time started grate but got hard headache after somwere round chapter 140 dont know why i even read till 300 ......................................................................................................... SPOILERS UNDER Ellia just disappear in one chapter she went crazy and pooof no more poor girl 1.in world where everyone is fine with polygamy only hes woman and his mother do not accept that it was even stated somwhere round chap 200 to 250 that woman would rather find somone they loved and be cocubine or servant that be or give virginity to somone they dont love cuz they live long there its worth it but so much drama from his wife and his mother omg cannot even describe it read get few headache's see for yourself. it feels somotimes that this novel is only about that and noting else forget death note forget cultivation forget action and when we are speaking bouth cultivation let me tell you cultivation is ****ed up im not gona spoil much for you lads but if you read this only becuz of cultivation do not read noting special happening here only special thingy is death node he got and it fking alive in him after like 100 chapters ridiculous ... on beggining i tho oke nice lets see what's gona happen now but noting few chapters here and there and poof fallen haven(death node name) is poping up in like 10 lines of every 30 chapters ridiculous. let me not start with other stuffs i will just rage my **** outh its not worth it wana stay as healty as possible , its a shame i say that after amazing start this ended up like this but eh well
oh let me say this for all rage'rs who will flame if i do not exp. properly polygamy is normal in this world some dudes got like 50 kids with like 30 wife just our protagonist wasted 200 outh of first 300 saying that his fiance and mother are not for polygamy only they . do not beleve me? sherry is i think 36th daughter of this unknown emperor she got 76th cousin (what is shes father son i guess it was never explained properly) but yea read at your OWN RISK
Dude I’ve completely up to date on this and yeah there are some misha** in the beginning but the author has really made it his own and is writing a really good story. Just because mc isn’t f**king everything in sight doesn’t mean it isn’t a good story. Also it’s literally called character development...they didn’t want to share the people they love which is an understandable thing but as the story progresses they realize that they can’t have these people just to themselves, be it they have other responsibilities or they are destined for amazing things. To write it off bc the author didn’t go the way with the story that you wanted and to try and stop others from reading it seriously shows your inability to not only get out of your own head space but also step back and appreciate a story from a different perspective. Nevertheless you have your opinion and i have mine so I’m genuinely sorry you don’t like the story but i do. Have a gorgeous rest of your day.
legnar:oh let me say this for all rage'rs who will flame if i do not exp. properly polygamy is normal in this world some dudes got like 50 kids with like 30 wife just our protagonist wasted 200 outh of first 300 saying that his fiance and mother are not for polygamy only they . do not beleve me? sherry is i think 36th daughter of this unknown emperor she got 76th cousin (what is shes father son i guess it was never explained properly) but yea read at your OWN RISK
Lol, if u read ahead, after MC gets married, about 50% of the chapters are just description of the *** he does. Also *** adventures of every character will be given a chapter or more. Went pure shit.
legnar:im in chapter 300 and it really is waste of time started grate but got hard headache after somwere round chapter 140 dont know why i even read till 300 ......................................................................................................... SPOILERS UNDER Ellia just disappear in one chapter she went crazy and pooof no more poor girl 1.in world where everyone is fine with polygamy only hes woman and his mother do not accept that it was even stated somwhere round chap 200 to 250 that woman would rather find somone they loved and be cocubine or servant that be or give virginity to somone they dont love cuz they live long there its worth it but so much drama from his wife and his mother omg cannot even describe it read get few headache's see for yourself. it feels somotimes that this novel is only about that and noting else forget death note forget cultivation forget action and when we are speaking bouth cultivation let me tell you cultivation is ****ed up im not gona spoil much for you lads but if you read this only becuz of cultivation do not read noting special happening here only special thingy is death node he got and it fking alive in him after like 100 chapters ridiculous ... on beggining i tho oke nice lets see what's gona happen now but noting few chapters here and there and poof fallen haven(death node name) is poping up in like 10 lines of every 30 chapters ridiculous. let me not start with other stuffs i will just rage my **** outh its not worth it wana stay as healty as possible , its a shame i say that after amazing start this ended up like this but eh well
I would like to read your comment before. I wast my time Reading this novel but drop this in that exactly part i hope this sh** clichê was solved alread if it is please tell me
thanks for the kind of review I was looking for. if a novel uses a bunch of tired old cliches, I try to avoid them. I've read too many weak novels that rely heavily on cliches because the author only writes on the side for fun. not hating on the author of anything, I think writing a novel like this as a hobby, is great, however I don't want to read novels like that. I prefer novels where the author is giving it his 100% effort, one of my favorite novels started out not so great, but the author started going to writing workshops etc, and the novel has gotten better and better. he's attempting to make writing his career and it shows. very few cliches and almost zero plot holes. foreshadowing that actually has a result that you can see sometimes hundreds of chapters later. that's the kind of complex story I'm looking for, rather than a fluff piece. again thanks for the review.
And what novel would that be? Let me know so I can check it out
Dreamstrafe:thanks for the kind of review I was looking for. if a novel uses a bunch of tired old cliches, I try to avoid them. I've read too many weak novels that rely heavily on cliches because the author only writes on the side for fun. not hating on the author of anything, I think writing a novel like this as a hobby, is great, however I don't want to read novels like that. I prefer novels where the author is giving it his 100% effort, one of my favorite novels started out not so great, but the author started going to writing workshops etc, and the novel has gotten better and better. he's attempting to make writing his career and it shows. very few cliches and almost zero plot holes. foreshadowing that actually has a result that you can see sometimes hundreds of chapters later. that's the kind of complex story I'm looking for, rather than a fluff piece. again thanks for the review.
The legend of Min Hong. It take a pretty dark turn later on, so I've set it down for a few months so idk if my review still holds true for the past hundred or so chapters, but Def the chapters prior to that. (there's Def some possible plot holes with the multiple personalities and issue of reincarnation, but those are really minor quibbles)
Mockingjay710:And what novel would that be? Let me know so I can check it out
the thing is the early chapters are also very cliche, but I guess you never had the "pleasure" to read a story with a similiar early chapters
can you pls tell me where this was said can't find it
legnar:im in chapter 300 and it really is waste of time started grate but got hard headache after somwere round chapter 140 dont know why i even read till 300 ......................................................................................................... SPOILERS UNDER Ellia just disappear in one chapter she went crazy and pooof no more poor girl 1.in world where everyone is fine with polygamy only hes woman and his mother do not accept that it was even stated somwhere round chap 200 to 250 that woman would rather find somone they loved and be cocubine or servant that be or give virginity to somone they dont love cuz they live long there its worth it but so much drama from his wife and his mother omg cannot even describe it read get few headache's see for yourself. it feels somotimes that this novel is only about that and noting else forget death note forget cultivation forget action and when we are speaking bouth cultivation let me tell you cultivation is ****ed up im not gona spoil much for you lads but if you read this only becuz of cultivation do not read noting special happening here only special thingy is death node he got and it fking alive in him after like 100 chapters ridiculous ... on beggining i tho oke nice lets see what's gona happen now but noting few chapters here and there and poof fallen haven(death node name) is poping up in like 10 lines of every 30 chapters ridiculous. let me not start with other stuffs i will just rage my **** outh its not worth it wana stay as healty as possible , its a shame i say that after amazing start this ended up like this but eh well
omg bro. don't you read your comments before posting them? this is even worse than mtl💀
legnar:im in chapter 300 and it really is waste of time started grate but got hard headache after somwere round chapter 140 dont know why i even read till 300 ......................................................................................................... SPOILERS UNDER Ellia just disappear in one chapter she went crazy and pooof no more poor girl 1.in world where everyone is fine with polygamy only hes woman and his mother do not accept that it was even stated somwhere round chap 200 to 250 that woman would rather find somone they loved and be cocubine or servant that be or give virginity to somone they dont love cuz they live long there its worth it but so much drama from his wife and his mother omg cannot even describe it read get few headache's see for yourself. it feels somotimes that this novel is only about that and noting else forget death note forget cultivation forget action and when we are speaking bouth cultivation let me tell you cultivation is ****ed up im not gona spoil much for you lads but if you read this only becuz of cultivation do not read noting special happening here only special thingy is death node he got and it fking alive in him after like 100 chapters ridiculous ... on beggining i tho oke nice lets see what's gona happen now but noting few chapters here and there and poof fallen haven(death node name) is poping up in like 10 lines of every 30 chapters ridiculous. let me not start with other stuffs i will just rage my **** outh its not worth it wana stay as healty as possible , its a shame i say that after amazing start this ended up like this but eh well
wht ish mtl, can eta itt? hu wa ish ths?
Suzune_Simp:omg bro. don't you read your comments before posting them? this is even worse than mtl💀
Great novel. In start it's like a silly novel because I think its author's first novel. But after 500, story build up well. After 1200+, story will get better, and it led readers to curious about what happen next. Some misunderstanding happens (like you will get wrong ideas for some scenarios) if you read around 300 or little less chapters because you will think it's just an OP or something not right to read because it's silly novel. But just trust and read at least 1500+ chapters and you will find those early worries not necessary and lot of OP(like death note) will come up with lot of restrictions. (Those are figured in novel by MC) Novel gets very interesting and now its lot more with cliffhangers (I'm at 2513). Also, author discount (99%) lowest tire privileged chapter for just for 1 coin. For unlock lowest tire 1 coin, each chapter also 1 coin (99% discount) Include 5 chapters for that tire. Also join his discord channel there you can clarify about your doubts about some chapters, if you feel novel will get wrong direction or not right in your sense. because author like to mislead readers (like teasing) and write entirely different stories. Also, author like to hang the reader's lot of cliffhangers. So, if you think it's not right to read story because you think it wrong like something happen, then you can ask it on discord spoiler channel and clarify what will happen next by fellow readers and continue to read.
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I just want to inform everyone of this awesome novel. I feel like it needs more support. Truly a wonderful novel that am sure everyone would love. And the author's has more in store for us. I hope we can all give this novel a chance. For I also love this novel, and for people who will say paid to do this and so. I only love the novel that is why I am doing this. Thanks everyone that decides to try the novel after seeing this. The name of the novel is: Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled
I just want to inform everyone of this awesome novel. I feel like it needs more support. Truly a wonderful novel that am sure everyone would love. And the author's has more in store for us. I hope we can all give this novel a chance. For I also love this novel, and for people who will say paid to do this and so. I only love the novel that is why I am doing this. Thanks everyone that decides to try the novel after seeing this. The name of the novel is: Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled
holson_Charles:REALLY.. guess i am not gonna waste my time..
I just want to inform everyone of this awesome novel. I feel like it needs more support. Truly a wonderful novel that am sure everyone would love. And the author's has more in store for us. I hope we can all give this novel a chance. For I also love this novel, and for people who will say paid to do this and so. I only love the novel that is why I am doing this. Thanks everyone that decides to try the novel after seeing this. The name of the novel is: Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled
Dreamstrafe:thanks for the kind of review I was looking for. if a novel uses a bunch of tired old cliches, I try to avoid them. I've read too many weak novels that rely heavily on cliches because the author only writes on the side for fun. not hating on the author of anything, I think writing a novel like this as a hobby, is great, however I don't want to read novels like that. I prefer novels where the author is giving it his 100% effort, one of my favorite novels started out not so great, but the author started going to writing workshops etc, and the novel has gotten better and better. he's attempting to make writing his career and it shows. very few cliches and almost zero plot holes. foreshadowing that actually has a result that you can see sometimes hundreds of chapters later. that's the kind of complex story I'm looking for, rather than a fluff piece. again thanks for the review.
I just want to inform everyone of this awesome novel. I feel like it needs more support. Truly a wonderful novel that am sure everyone would love. And the author's has more in store for us. I hope we can all give this novel a chance. For I also love this novel, and for people who will say paid to do this and so. I only love the novel that is why I am doing this. Thanks everyone that decides to try the novel after seeing this. The name of the novel is: Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled
Mockingjay710:And what novel would that be? Let me know so I can check it out
I just want to inform everyone of this awesome novel. I feel like it needs more support. Truly a wonderful novel that am sure everyone would love. And the author's has more in store for us. I hope we can all give this novel a chance. For I also love this novel, and for people who will say paid to do this and so. I only love the novel that is why I am doing this. Thanks everyone that decides to try the novel after seeing this. The name of the novel is: Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled
Azurfighting:the thing is the early chapters are also very cliche, but I guess you never had the "pleasure" to read a story with a similiar early chapters
