OukisLips

Winterfell? Didn't it just say he was near the wall, how is he suddenly now near Winterfell?

this is so stupid

So why is Shane mumbling to himself now? You know you can just use '...' for thoughts instead of having all the characters talk to themselves

this is getting annoying. If the MC isn't gonna change anything from canon, then what's the point of a fanfic?

Should've called him Pierce

😂 'please help me find a signal to I can report you to the police!'

I think it's supposed to be Janie or Joni or something. Technically Johnny can be a girls name according to Google, but I've never met one

It's a translation error