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Really liked the story so far, but the last few chapters with the tech and knowledge, it feels like he’s getting handed too much on a silver platter

This, especially since you already vaguely tied in the burnt tribe briefly earlier in the story

Wait, are the regular clansmen also blocking laser shots? Isn’t that something unique to Jedi/sith due to the force? At most the lightsaber techniques allow them to block blaster shots more efficiently, but ultimately it’s because they’re force sensitive. So are his clansmen also force sensitive to some degree?

Honestly this is jumping the shark when writing Star Wars fanfiction

Is this a translation?

Ooh, I feel like some naruto abilities could translate well to force techniques, like wall and water walking.

Damn, this is some serious character development right here. Other webnovel authors should take note

This whole thing is completely stupid. If we had the tech to build a lethal, portable railgun with random hardware store merch, it’d already be a common household item…

Yo, if it ain’t broke, don’t fix it. This whole endeavor is a waste of time and resources

Translation messing up in these dialogues. From the formatting, was the original fanfic in Russian?