Alright guys, as the author, I'll be shameless enough to rate my novel 5 stars, hehe. This novel has just started, I'll be mostly focusing on Story Development and Character Design, I want to make the characters as vibrant as possible, each with their own thoughts. The starting of this novel has no adversaries for the MC, he just cultivates to be a genius, after all he'll be a kid in the start. Anyway can't put much spoilers here, hope you'll have fun reading it. Guaranteed 7 chapters a week. Cheers. hehe. If i miss, please remind me about it in the latest chapter comments. Happy reading.

Don't let the bad reviews stop you from reading this awesome novel. First the r-18 comes in later. This is not a story that only focuses on getting lots of girls but giving those girls a good story with the mc. The adventure of the author from layers to layers is amazing. He even goes back to earth which is not something you see much from other novels with same genre. The characters are well written. Its not a novel where he gets a new girl in his harem every 100 chaps. He loves his fam and his scenes with them are pretty wholesome. His fam also plays a role and they are not just in the background. Claire and Logan power couple is one of the best out there. The girls in the harem are not trophies and are trying their best to get stronger. The cultivation systems are unique and might get a bit confusing as you go on but author has a guide for that. The mystery in the novel is even quite intriguing. The world is pretty well built. Author takes time to introduce the territories and its people. There is also a bit of comedy here and there. MOST IMPORTANTLY, he doesnt leave his wives when he goes on an adventure. He bring them and fights with him together. Something you hardly see in other novels. Im not saying that the novel has no problems but they are pretty small and are only at the start of the novel. The author improves along the way and massive improvements can already be seen early on the novel .As you go on you can see that Davis' adventure with his wives are amazing. P.S. : Shirley is a goddess Overall Writing Quality : 4.5/5 Stability of Updates : 5 (Although we would love 3 chaps a day) Story Development : 5 Character Design : 5 World Background 5

This novel is like a gold in the mud.. I want to take it, but afraid it will make my gloves dirty.. After so deep in love with some novel but after that got problem.. Maybe with qidiann or the reader its self.. Original novel is the least trusted this day.. Just hopefully you are not.. If you write novel for money.. Say it now.. Power stone? Patreon? Thats easy matter as long as the writer keep his/her words. If you write for fun or maybe you just have an extra time and cannot make it fast realese with 1 chapter per day. Say it too.. So we, the annoying reader will not complain.. Thanks if you read this author.. And sorry for my bad english ^^

I like reading the comments and reviews more. Specially on how our author here defends himself. I do say for sure he has blind confidence about his work. But please remember Mr. Author, not everyone can be pleased easily. As for the ones who gave their own opinions and reviews, please do remember that the author is writing this story/web novel using his own limited ideas/mind/brain, heck he might even be dreaming scenes for his story in his sleep before writing them. Amateur authors/writers are different from real authors/writers, most writers/authors are even graduate in these kind of fields, meaning they are already a master of their own craft, they even probably spend a lot time just to study (includes: higher English lv, grammar expert, story chart/flow etc... ) before writing their own work. Real expert writers will finish a volume of their work first, then spend a lot of time reviewing it and editing before posting them or publishing. Very different from most amateurs. **: I am looking forward for more roasting. Xd

This novel started out great, but the author purposefully sabotaged it with overused and frustratingly annoying cliches. I won’t say how exactly because I don’t like to spoil, but at around chapter 100, the author introduced a plot that essentially made all of the character development that came before it useless. That’s over 100 chapters of tedious character development that went down the drain. What a waste of time, unless you’re a masochist who likes being trolled

what can i say? i have no complaints currently, and don't see any coming. it took longer then I'd like for the harem to start up, but ever since it i can see the hold on it. I'll be sticking to this one till the end. To the author, stay safe, it would be a travesty to have this book suddenly stop.

Tl:dr B- edging into a B. Better then most but still rough around the edges. This is a solid twist on the standard reincarnation cultivation novel. The author's writing is getting better and just about everything from a narrative perspective works just fine. With that said there are some areas which need improvement. The characters and world building are not detailed enough to feel, well... real. The plot moves rather quickly and not enough time is spent to genuinely get to know the characters which are so pivotal to the story. I appreciate that the author isn't padding the word count but more fine details would make the characters stand out from the background. All in all it's a good first novel from this author so expect some rough edges. I recommend that you give this novel a shot and see what happens; it's better then 85% of the stuff out there.

Just a fair warning; If you are here for romance, don’t bother. If you are here for the “death” and “emperor” name, dont bother. If you are here for attachable characters, don’t bother. If you are here for great character development, don’t bother. The novel is passable if you ignore everything said above, and instead; If you are here for a dense protagonist, do bother. If you are here for an idiot of a protagonist, do bother. (the difference between the two is the latter is about how he handles situations. Whether he considers the advantages and disadvantages of actions or not) If you are here for everything that comes with every Japanese harem protagonists (aka hero, ignorant about everything that concerns his harem, emotionally unstable, friendship, etc.), do bother. If you are here for an interesting plot, do bother. Unluckily for me, I had simply looked at the name and ended up being click-baited. I never thought I would be frustrated enough to drop it. What a journey (lasted til chapter 142) this was.. I hope I could forget ever reading this soon.

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