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XulLv104yr
2020-08-03 11:16

Just a fair warning; If you are here for romance, don’t bother. If you are here for the “death” and “emperor” name, dont bother. If you are here for attachable characters, don’t bother. If you are here for great character development, don’t bother. The novel is passable if you ignore everything said above, and instead; If you are here for a dense protagonist, do bother. If you are here for an idiot of a protagonist, do bother. (the difference between the two is the latter is about how he handles situations. Whether he considers the advantages and disadvantages of actions or not) If you are here for everything that comes with every Japanese harem protagonists (aka hero, ignorant about everything that concerns his harem, emotionally unstable, friendship, etc.), do bother. If you are here for an interesting plot, do bother. Unluckily for me, I had simply looked at the name and ended up being click-baited. I never thought I would be frustrated enough to drop it. What a journey (lasted til chapter 142) this was.. I hope I could forget ever reading this soon.

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Stardust_BreakerAuthor

you forgot to delete this as well.

LonelyDoraemonLv1

I disagree buddy, the novel has great romance later on, characters are extremely attachable too. Character development is great as the story progresses.

DjtomahouLv14

I agree, I read over 130 chaps and starting to lose patience, especially after his friend the girl that loves him changes personality and wants to kill him.

IMightBeGodLv3

Yeah but a r 18 novel can't afford to spend this long with a Child protag it unreadable

LonelyDoraemon:I disagree buddy, the novel has great romance later on, characters are extremely attachable too. Character development is great as the story progresses.
Phenix_RoxLv14

Great novel. In start it's like a silly novel because I think its author's first novel. But after 500, story build up well. After 1200+, story will get better, and it led readers to curious about what happen next. Some misunderstanding happens (like you will get wrong ideas for some scenarios) if you read around 300 or little less chapters because you will think it's just an OP or something not right to read because it's silly novel. But just trust and read at least 1500+ chapters and you will find those early worries not necessary and lot of OP(like death note) will come up with lot of restrictions. (Those are figured in novel by MC) Novel gets very interesting and now its lot more with cliffhangers (I'm at 2513). Also, author discount (99%) lowest tire privileged chapter for just for 1 coin. For unlock lowest tire 1 coin, each chapter also 1 coin (99% discount) Include 5 chapters for that tire. Also join his discord channel there you can clarify about your doubts about some chapters, if you feel novel will get wrong direction or not right in your sense. because author like to mislead readers (like teasing) and write entirely different stories. Also, author like to hang the reader's lot of cliffhangers. So, if you think it's not right to read story because you think it wrong like something happen, then you can ask it on discord spoiler channel and clarify what will happen next by fellow readers and continue to read.

HeavenlyAzureLotusLv14

L comment- book is straight fire. Author had the long game in mind, the early chapters really help you understand his intentions and characters as they grow stronger. In terms of 18+ cultivation novels this is top tier.

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Scripture02Lv10

Don't let the bad reviews stop you from reading this awesome novel. First the r-18 comes in later. This is not a story that only focuses on getting lots of girls but giving those girls a good story with the mc. The adventure of the author from layers to layers is amazing. He even goes back to earth which is not something you see much from other novels with same genre. The characters are well written. Its not a novel where he gets a new girl in his harem every 100 chaps. He loves his fam and his scenes with them are pretty wholesome. His fam also plays a role and they are not just in the background. Claire and Logan power couple is one of the best out there. The girls in the harem are not trophies and are trying their best to get stronger. The cultivation systems are unique and might get a bit confusing as you go on but author has a guide for that. The mystery in the novel is even quite intriguing. The world is pretty well built. Author takes time to introduce the territories and its people. There is also a bit of comedy here and there. MOST IMPORTANTLY, he doesnt leave his wives when he goes on an adventure. He bring them and fights with him together. Something you hardly see in other novels. Im not saying that the novel has no problems but they are pretty small and are only at the start of the novel. The author improves along the way and massive improvements can already be seen early on the novel .As you go on you can see that Davis' adventure with his wives are amazing. P.S. : Shirley is a goddess Overall Writing Quality : 4.5/5 Stability of Updates : 5 (Although we would love 3 chaps a day) Story Development : 5 Character Design : 5 World Background 5

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