Well, I can say Only this that If there was a lower Point that 1 star i would gave it. I personally decided to Drop this novel. This is a Whole collected things of Extreme Spelling and Grammar Problems and mistakes. Writing Style of truly childish and Full of problems, I think that Author doesn't even give a look at his writing to see that what he himself/herself Wrote. and he/she doesn't even has a Plan for his novel. I 100% sure that the Author is a completely newbie not in the way of writing but also novels. I'm truly sure that the number of the novels that he/she read is less than fingers of a hand. Why ? You can see of the messy Background of story messy cultivation path and it's to the situation that i suspect Author doesn't know even the meaning of Cultivation Technique and Cultivation Skill ? MC with Only one Quest will become OP. Author in your Life do you play any game at all for not knowing the Quest how works? The Only good point of novels is it's fast update rate that this itself has caused serious Damage to the Story line. Friend Aliens in Cultivation world? it's OK because it's your novel but try to do it properly. Well at last the ones that want to see a novel of without direction and purpose Read it it's fun in some places anyway I Dropped It maybe you like this novel .
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with the word Extreme, it should be that my spelling isn't readable, and my grammar is also unreadable.. if you read about my novel, isn't that not extreme? just failure of layering my pieces? well thanks for reading my novel, Oh mister perfect! I hope you can write something better :) Thanks!
Thanks for you answer my friend Review in the original novels is mainly a Direct way to the Authors to now that the novel that they're writing is what grade and what problem it has. I'm not perfect and I'm full of problem and mistakes. But the problem is that the problem of your novel is way beyond of grammar and spelling. It has structure problems and i ask a question from you. Are you played a RPG game ? The Quest that you obtain having a certain reward and process. Also i strongly believe that you yourself Didn't understand the meaning of Cultivation. Friend, it's your novels so you can do whatever you want with your story and characters and even cultivation and power level, But i give you an advice that you go and for once read the story that you write. I bet that even yourself will be shocked to the core for what you written in them from main story line to characters that are completely unreal and you see that how terrible that it is. Thanks for your work
OmnipotentDad:with the word Extreme, it should be that my spelling isn't readable, and my grammar is also unreadable.. if you read about my novel, isn't that not extreme? just failure of layering my pieces? well thanks for reading my novel, Oh mister perfect! I hope you can write something better :) Thanks!
The way you reviewed my novel is like describing something unreadable, which means you are saying that my novel can't be read right? Well i respect your opinion great one, being perfect would be hard, and yeah, like my review, i really am a newbie author, and 2weeks old at that.
VEGEKU:Thanks for you answer my friend Review in the original novels is mainly a Direct way to the Authors to now that the novel that they're writing is what grade and what problem it has. I'm not perfect and I'm full of problem and mistakes. But the problem is that the problem of your novel is way beyond of grammar and spelling. It has structure problems and i ask a question from you. Are you played a RPG game ? The Quest that you obtain having a certain reward and process. Also i strongly believe that you yourself Didn't understand the meaning of Cultivation. Friend, it's your novels so you can do whatever you want with your story and characters and even cultivation and power level, But i give you an advice that you go and for once read the story that you write. I bet that even yourself will be shocked to the core for what you written in them from main story line to characters that are completely unreal and you see that how terrible that it is. Thanks for your work
in the current situation of the novel it's barely readable but you can be better and it's in early stage so don't be upset the idea is good it can be a good one in future.
OmnipotentDad:The way you reviewed my novel is like describing something unreadable, which means you are saying that my novel can't be read right? Well i respect your opinion great one, being perfect would be hard, and yeah, like my review, i really am a newbie author, and 2weeks old at that.
Thank you so much!
VEGEKU:in the current situation of the novel it's barely readable but you can be better and it's in early stage so don't be upset the idea is good it can be a good one in future.
But his novel still the best dude we are hunger with a true heavenly fantasys novel, and i am love it to the grave LoL xoxo
OmnipotentDad:Thank you so much!
Speaking of someone who hasn't learnt grammar nor read novels, you pretty much fit that part, Vegeku... "writing style of childish" : On what planet does that phrase even have meaning??? There are five aspects to rate the book on. Writing quality is only one of them, because it can be solved with an editor. It's quite hard for me to believe your review even if I hadn't read the book. Your review seems to have a narrow perspective.
Friend if you read this novel you can easily see that what is childish that i said also my problem with this novel is with storyline, background and characters and ... you must know that English isn't my first language so i don't care about grammar and spelling of original novels but in the review you must tell them that others know it. And last my user name Vegeku is nearly 3 years that exist in various site and i read web novels for more that 3 years, what is meaning of my review about author don't read that much novels and ... ht's perfectly clear in his novel you just go and read it. In The End Friend why so much harsh ? even Author replied to me except the part about grammar accepted other problems that i said in the review. So why you reply in this way?
Narvales:Speaking of someone who hasn't learnt grammar nor read novels, you pretty much fit that part, Vegeku... "writing style of childish" : On what planet does that phrase even have meaning??? There are five aspects to rate the book on. Writing quality is only one of them, because it can be solved with an editor. It's quite hard for me to believe your review even if I hadn't read the book. Your review seems to have a narrow perspective.
The problem is, I have read it. The grammar is pretty bad, and that can make it seem lot worse than it is. However, based on your review, it doesn't deserve any less than 3 or maybe 2.5 stars. The one helpful thing said was about the alien. Reviews are meant to help others choose what to read, but they're also there to help authors improve. If you're going to write a review, you should at least make it helpful to the author. Let him know why you have a problem with the plot. Don't write paragraphs about the terrible grammar the author explicitly warned us about, and only mention a sentence or two on what he should change. If you think his writing is childish (after ignoring the grammar and non-existent spelling errors as of now), then give a few examples. Be helpful. Writing reviews that simply insult can discourage authors with real potential.
VEGEKU:Friend if you read this novel you can easily see that what is childish that i said also my problem with this novel is with storyline, background and characters and ... you must know that English isn't my first language so i don't care about grammar and spelling of original novels but in the review you must tell them that others know it. And last my user name Vegeku is nearly 3 years that exist in various site and i read web novels for more that 3 years, what is meaning of my review about author don't read that much novels and ... ht's perfectly clear in his novel you just go and read it. In The End Friend why so much harsh ? even Author replied to me except the part about grammar accepted other problems that i said in the review. So why you reply in this way?
Friend i accept your comment and will write in details and examples in the future Also in my future reviews i consider author side to off course this was my intend to this point but it seems that i wasn't successful so thanks ^_-
Narvales:The problem is, I have read it. The grammar is pretty bad, and that can make it seem lot worse than it is. However, based on your review, it doesn't deserve any less than 3 or maybe 2.5 stars. The one helpful thing said was about the alien. Reviews are meant to help others choose what to read, but they're also there to help authors improve. If you're going to write a review, you should at least make it helpful to the author. Let him know why you have a problem with the plot. Don't write paragraphs about the terrible grammar the author explicitly warned us about, and only mention a sentence or two on what he should change. If you think his writing is childish (after ignoring the grammar and non-existent spelling errors as of now), then give a few examples. Be helpful. Writing reviews that simply insult can discourage authors with real potential.
Sorry to bash on you but your saying his story is hard to read, but to be honest your review was harder to read. But just like his novel I get the gist of what your both saying. Bad grammar,spelling, and I believe the story gets all messy because the author is trying to push out chapters fast but that sometimes has bad result.
yes, that's the exact problem that we have here in this novel Though it seems that it's getting better and better with each chapter and the storyline and other things became better in the recent chapters so i must read it once again for the chapters after 40
Shadowles_Immortal:Sorry to bash on you but your saying his story is hard to read, but to be honest your review was harder to read. But just like his novel I get the gist of what your both saying. Bad grammar,spelling, and I believe the story gets all messy because the author is trying to push out chapters fast but that sometimes has bad result.
Bro way dont you just accept it think of the story like the mc is strong from the start and his getting stronger and there you have it a not so bad novel.
VEGEKU:Thanks for you answer my friend Review in the original novels is mainly a Direct way to the Authors to now that the novel that they're writing is what grade and what problem it has. I'm not perfect and I'm full of problem and mistakes. But the problem is that the problem of your novel is way beyond of grammar and spelling. It has structure problems and i ask a question from you. Are you played a RPG game ? The Quest that you obtain having a certain reward and process. Also i strongly believe that you yourself Didn't understand the meaning of Cultivation. Friend, it's your novels so you can do whatever you want with your story and characters and even cultivation and power level, But i give you an advice that you go and for once read the story that you write. I bet that even yourself will be shocked to the core for what you written in them from main story line to characters that are completely unreal and you see that how terrible that it is. Thanks for your work
Well it finished hope he does vol 2
VEGEKU:yes, that's the exact problem that we have here in this novel Though it seems that it's getting better and better with each chapter and the storyline and other things became better in the recent chapters so i must read it once again for the chapters after 40
So be it whatever if you call it childish he has a lot of fans that love this kind of story, are you jealous? If you didn't satisfied shuuu go other sites don't come here and bark.
VEGEKU:Friend if you read this novel you can easily see that what is childish that i said also my problem with this novel is with storyline, background and characters and ... you must know that English isn't my first language so i don't care about grammar and spelling of original novels but in the review you must tell them that others know it. And last my user name Vegeku is nearly 3 years that exist in various site and i read web novels for more that 3 years, what is meaning of my review about author don't read that much novels and ... ht's perfectly clear in his novel you just go and read it. In The End Friend why so much harsh ? even Author replied to me except the part about grammar accepted other problems that i said in the review. So why you reply in this way?
hehehehehe i know a lot of people like you , you people just are psychopath ones that doing something and constantly bother in other people works , i'm very much aware of situations like this Did you come here to try and buy some attention to yourself? Everybody in this site know me that I'm a direct person and talk everything i want whether in the comments or in the review and always tried to say the right subject you must know that until now i never badmouthing other people , you are the first And you better know that I'm purely here for my love for web novels and in my country not only i can't get any benefit from this site i can't even buy SS! yes ,i can't even buy SS so what money and .... I'm know 27 and i am and Electrical Engineer so can you tell me I'm Jealous of what? i'm truly sorry for the site to have user like you in the site
linchufeng:So be it whatever if you call it childish he has a lot of fans that love this kind of story, are you jealous? If you didn't satisfied shuuu go other sites don't come here and bark.
Lol, whatever dude, you should read back your review, your word too harsh and too mean. Give him some space will ya, he already told ya that he is a newbie not some 5-star writer like the harry potter author. Just chill. To me it so means. I'm sorry if you feel angry with my word but if the story ya cant accepts it just leave it alone will ya. That my style of talking to another person when i feel his word too rude. That's all, I'm not bad mouthing ya.
VEGEKU:hehehehehe i know a lot of people like you , you people just are psychopath ones that doing something and constantly bother in other people works , i'm very much aware of situations like this Did you come here to try and buy some attention to yourself? Everybody in this site know me that I'm a direct person and talk everything i want whether in the comments or in the review and always tried to say the right subject you must know that until now i never badmouthing other people , you are the first And you better know that I'm purely here for my love for web novels and in my country not only i can't get any benefit from this site i can't even buy SS! yes ,i can't even buy SS so what money and .... I'm know 27 and i am and Electrical Engineer so can you tell me I'm Jealous of what? i'm truly sorry for the site to have user like you in the site
So serious? Chill dough..
Yeah , Unfortunately site don't have the Edit option I have requested several time from them by mails that they put the Edit button but they don't do , why? i don't know So if one want to change his review there is no way unless write a new review and delete the previous one i read novel to 60 chapters after reading it to the latest chapter I'll write another Review in a few days later
linchufeng:Lol, whatever dude, you should read back your review, your word too harsh and too mean. Give him some space will ya, he already told ya that he is a newbie not some 5-star writer like the harry potter author. Just chill. To me it so means. I'm sorry if you feel angry with my word but if the story ya cant accepts it just leave it alone will ya. That my style of talking to another person when i feel his word too rude. That's all, I'm not bad mouthing ya.
ahhh a beautiful war just what i wanted .
