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Murderer
MurdererLv46yr
2018-05-24 06:17

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Supreme Martial System

OmnipotentDad
3.8
264 Chs

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Kirora
KiroraLv5

Sounds gay.

6yr
3
NotSomeone
NotSomeoneLv4

Oh..... i see your a man of culture

6yr
7
RohanM
RohanMLv5

Hopefully the author ignores this “Murderer”, LOL But seriously hope no harem.

6yr
7
yamachy
yamachyLv13

No

6yr
2
Snupi
SnupiLv11

God

6yr
1
Livergut
LivergutLv5

summary says wives

6yr
2
Procrastinate
ProcrastinateLv11

Im a real man of coulture the religion of non harems NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO

6yr
8
Beertooooo
BeertoooooLv4

It is a harem,cuz u can see in the sypnosis,it said "wives"

6yr
4
LALMON
LALMONLv6

lol

6yr
1
Water0202020
Water0202020Lv6

I was depressed because everywhere, people screamed please no harem. Finally, a great leader has appeared to bring us to the grand world of harem💂💂

6yr
3
NotSomeone
NotSomeoneLv4

*Uppercuts non-Harem Followers* OOOOOOOOOOF

Beertooooo:It is a harem,cuz u can see in the sypnosis,it said "wives"
6yr
Kain
KainLv13

Why do you guys love harems? characters are usually not fleshed out, everything is for the most part just generic and cliche writing

6yr
4
h3r4ldy
h3r4ldyLv5

"No God, Please NOOOO!" - Michael Scott

6yr
3
LoFa
LoFaLv13

Did you want a harem?🤔

6yr
Godknows
GodknowsLv5

haha ..

6yr
Rawr_Kitten
Rawr_KittenLv5

Oh great ... another novel about how a guy pointlessly plows random females then runs off to kill stuff and most likely wont show up for around 5 to 500 years and shes already had a kid and he will be a half assed dad who either gives the kid tons of stuff or ignores the kid and all fatherly responsibility..... rolls eyes-

6yr
2
Infractuous
InfractuousLv5

It fulfills our sad fantasies

Kain:Why do you guys love harems? characters are usually not fleshed out, everything is for the most part just generic and cliche writing
6yr
PapiJisas
PapiJisasLv6

yeѕ yeѕ yeѕ

6yr
Other Reviews
OmnipotentDad
OmnipotentDadAuthor

Hello everyone, I am the author of this novel. I'm a newbie author that just started yesterday about 16hrs ago, I`m expecting this novel to get to atleast 800+ chapters im currently struggling from making another novel as to avoid having my ideas divided, i wish you guys can support this novel of mine as I am still a newb Thanks!

6yr

L1_a
L1_aLv5

Now to vote with my other accounts ................................................................................................................................................................

6yr
VEGEKU
VEGEKULv6

Well, I can say Only this that If there was a lower Point that 1 star i would gave it. I personally decided to Drop this novel. This is a Whole collected things of Extreme Spelling and Grammar Problems and mistakes. Writing Style of truly childish and Full of problems, I think that Author doesn't even give a look at his writing to see that what he himself/herself Wrote. and he/she doesn't even has a Plan for his novel. I 100% sure that the Author is a completely newbie not in the way of writing but also novels. I'm truly sure that the number of the novels that he/she read is less than fingers of a hand. Why ? You can see of the messy Background of story messy cultivation path and it's to the situation that i suspect Author doesn't know even the meaning of Cultivation Technique and Cultivation Skill ? MC with Only one Quest will become OP. Author in your Life do you play any game at all for not knowing the Quest how works? The Only good point of novels is it's fast update rate that this itself has caused serious Damage to the Story line. Friend Aliens in Cultivation world? it's OK because it's your novel but try to do it properly. Well at last the ones that want to see a novel of without direction and purpose Read it it's fun in some places anyway I Dropped It maybe you like this novel .

6yr
FishButterfly
FishButterflyLv4

TAGS ......... -Transmigration -Male MC -Stupid MC -Harem -Echhi -System -Cultivation -Kingdom Building -Aliens (OuterSpace) -Humour -Transport Into Other World -Overpowered MC -Sudden Strength Gain -Unpredictable story -Magic and Swords -Teacher -Family

6yr
CH405Kaiser
CH405KaiserLv6

Slow downonmaking your story development. Also if you’re unsure of writing, you can use grammarly or google drive to help you write. Author needs to decide whether or not his dialogue will contain dialogue quotes or use the actor script dialogue. Even then, author needs to learn how to use dialogue quotes. For the background, as readers we don't need to know everything of the character’s tragic happenings. Limit the background to 1-2 sentences. Don't overly explain why this character does certain actions.

6yr
coffee_is_layfu
coffee_is_layfuLv4

I know that in elementary school. No, not even then. Kindergarten. Yes, in kindergarten, proper capitalization is already taught. [small] for the common nouns and most words [Caps] for the sentence starters and proper nouns, names, etc So, why oh why is this story littered with them? I can't even get past the first chapter. And to note, the first chapter is the one that informs the readers what kind of story they'll be reading. It's the King for first impressions. I even checked some more chaps, and basically author-san, your grammar officially sucks. Or find yourself a good editor. I was browsing through the top ** ranks and randomly clicked you. I would've stayed silent but... You are one of the reasons why most readers here have a bad impression on Original stories.

6yr
Skiadra
SkiadraLv14

I can barely understand what's going on. The author really needs an editor. I like the base concept, but because the English is bad, I can't really enjoy. I stuck with it for a bit, but it became super contrived after a while. Like, even the MC from Strongest System didn't progress this quickly. And none of the characters have any depth to them either. Honestly it feel like a bunch of poorly executed cultivation novel tropes. I can still enjoy that kind of thing on a good day, but the poor English prevents me from even that. I hope this project gets an editor so I can start reading again. I really did like the concept!

6yr
paja
pajaLv14

Well english is not my 1 st language so I will not say a word about writing quality, to be honest after 7 chapters i was thinking that this novel will be at last decent. My bad. Its not even aceptable. Its awfull! After 20 chaps mc is already like one of the strongest in this world. Damn, plot without purpose, illogical to the point when author is even writing what he feels in the middle of the chapter. I can't focus on story when there is idiotic sentence from time to time. Whats for + thats the stability of updates. Im droping this one

6yr
b0ss
b0ssLv5

Not very good at all. But I wish the author would make another novel and fix his mistakes.hdbdndndnfkfkckcjckutjktjtjtjkgkgkggkkggkjffjcmdjdkdndndmdkfmcmfkfkfkfkckkc

6yr
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