Well english is not my 1 st language so I will not say a word about writing quality, to be honest after 7 chapters i was thinking that this novel will be at last decent. My bad. Its not even aceptable. Its awfull! After 20 chaps mc is already like one of the strongest in this world. Damn, plot without purpose, illogical to the point when author is even writing what he feels in the middle of the chapter. I can't focus on story when there is idiotic sentence from time to time. Whats for + thats the stability of updates. Im droping this one
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well some novels start with the character being op why are you so mad ? i can't say anything about the plot that your point of view . i thought writing works because you but your feelings into it but not much . but thanks at least you said other problems not like anybody else that cursed the grammar xD
1 st mc was not op from the start he goes from no name to superhero in like 20 chapters Well yeah your partly right, I give you that. I was really disappointed with this novel to the point that I've got more and more posse after every chapter. But what I write is still right, o plot, lack of basic logic, no background at all.thats what most important in novel in really bad.i think that with this you can agree aswell
i kinda didn't get it but i kinda did . let him be op what matters are a well planed novel actually and now that i think about it if the author lack the knowledge about what he write and how to write it is still bad . but you can still change stuff like the naming of every stage of cultivation does it have 10 or 5 ranks does it have low - mid - peak?that basically basic logic xD about the novel itself it doesn't have to be copied as long as it is decent . it is a novel after all you write what you want as long as there is a plan for the novel and not just thinking of throwing chapters faster without any consideration for whether our not this is the way you want "your" novel be . and at the end if you didn't like it maybe others did maybe the author want something he likes so he doesn't get bored . ****** right? i think i got what you meant.
Yeah something like that, yeah this novel is author piece, so he can do anything with this. I just dont like this art, I prefer to read something that is at least planned and every chapter have some common sense in it. Thanks for understanding.
I see, it is my fault that you didn't get the plot, well thanks for reading my novel at least :)
Op still have to limits at least.. You can't just breakthrough 50lvl cultivation in an instant.
