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I like the story so far there are no major grammar issues and ive enjoyed the reas so far. So give it a try

I like this book it’s actually really good the grammer is not bad at all I see small mistakes but if your a normal reader you would read right pass it I like this book very much so ima add it to my library the only thing bad is the update schedule I wished they updated more!

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For me I feel quite disappointed by this novel, just my personal opinion. First the idea of an speaking A.I/System is quite annoying. Second there was no reason for him to understand humans as a monster (Lizardman) and not understand goblins. Well you could argument that he is a reincarnated human, but that doesn't mean that the women's father that he rescues just teases them and hinting for them to be a pair. Aside from that the grammar is decent. All in all a decent story, but just not my type.