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MHA: GAMER PATH

Autor: Jovami6729
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Disclaimer All copyrighted content is the property of its respective owner(s). A path towards the beyond has come and gone. Thus replacing the path from beyond closes with another path opening to reveal the path of glory and honor. This path opens to a world of superpowered individuals following their paths of heroes, vigilantes, or villains. Danger is constant always filled with those in power doing as they please. Changes he once thought canon was reality now take a curve differently than the intended path. How will the blank soul named Ren Yuki handle this new world with no personal memories of his other life other than general knowledge handle this his new world being this world GAMER filled with people with superpowers? "Time to go beyond... PLUS ULTRA!"

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Celleborn
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WRITE A FUDGING SYNOPSIS! PLEASE! Is not that hard, instead of a bunch of nonsense just tell me what the story is about.

Psan
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what rubish intro is this? you wrote so much to talk about your novel but you said nothing. learn to make half decent synopsis and replace this insult

YesodVivrie
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Author, please. NEJIRE, MOMO, TOGA, MELISSA, OUR ALIEN QUEEN MINA ASHIDO, MIRKO, KAINA AKA LADY NAGANT. AND SAVE ERI FOR THE LOVE OF RIKUDOU.

Erick_Espinoza
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GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD

KiemaAraragi
KiemaAraragiLv12KiemaAraragi

Ah shit here we go again! Another yes yes yes time to read another 200 chapters

SAURON_
SAURON_Lv2SAURON_

Really good just like your past fanfictions but please please keep this going dont drop it .................................................................

Erick_Espinoza
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DRAVIDIAN
DRAVIDIANLv4DRAVIDIAN

The plot and idea behind the fic is good so instead of speaking about everything I like, I’ll speak about what I don’t. Some scenes are copied from other fics, I recently read BNHA:Singularity and from there I recognized these same scenes: MC compliments frog girl and gravity girl too much and they get shy and avoid him Mina tells Jiro to spy on the boys convo due to being worried about MC Frog and gravity girl apologise to him after ignoring him Kaminari jests after the girls ignore him. The story will probably stray away from BNHA singularity in the future, but I hope that it doesn’t have many more scenes that are so similar.

Pocket_AI
Pocket_AILv2Pocket_AI

1. Some dialogues are outright stolen from other works and just don't work on this work. Example: Nezu and All Might suprise when they hear that mc's quirk name is All in One. He literally just told them about All for One and One for All, it just don't work here. At least think why are you stealing. 2. Other characters POV's are somehow incredibly dull and artificial. And considering that you put them very often that's a problem. 3. Fix your description. A lot of words with zero meaning.

The_Great_Sage69
The_Great_Sage69Lv4The_Great_Sage69

The story is good but my god is so hard to read because of all the grammatical errors and mistakes. It isn't unreadable by any means, pretty well written than some of the other garbage on this app but it takes alot of effort since the author uses commas and other punctuations very wrong and the sentence formation isn't great. Also, the author can't decide whether he wants a heroic and caring mc or a manipulative mc, many times it feels like the mc is bipolar when sometimes he is manipulative and other times he feels the need to be a hero or be heroic. Most of the stuff I write here isn't anything major, just a little bit of me being nitpicky. All in all a pretty good story.👍👍

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