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Psan
PsanLv66mth
2024-10-11 14:20

what rubish intro is this? you wrote so much to talk about your novel but you said nothing. learn to make half decent synopsis and replace this insult

MHA: GAMER PATH

Jovami6729
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Celleborn
CellebornLv2

WRITE A FUDGING SYNOPSIS! PLEASE! Is not that hard, instead of a bunch of nonsense just tell me what the story is about.

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Pocket_AI
Pocket_AILv2

1. Some dialogues are outright stolen from other works and just don't work on this work. Example: Nezu and All Might suprise when they hear that mc's quirk name is All in One. He literally just told them about All for One and One for All, it just don't work here. At least think why are you stealing. 2. Other characters POV's are somehow incredibly dull and artificial. And considering that you put them very often that's a problem. 3. Fix your description. A lot of words with zero meaning.

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YesodVivrie
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Author, please. NEJIRE, MOMO, TOGA, MELISSA, OUR ALIEN QUEEN MINA ASHIDO, MIRKO, KAINA AKA LADY NAGANT. AND SAVE ERI FOR THE LOVE OF RIKUDOU.

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Matheus_3355
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Dini_Jimenez
Dini_JimenezLv13

I'll try yo continúe read this, but put in the sinopsis that you're going to replace the Mc and that the protagonist of this novel Is edgy as hell...

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The_Great_Sage69
The_Great_Sage69Lv4

The story is good but my god is so hard to read because of all the grammatical errors and mistakes. It isn't unreadable by any means, pretty well written than some of the other garbage on this app but it takes alot of effort since the author uses commas and other punctuations very wrong and the sentence formation isn't great. Also, the author can't decide whether he wants a heroic and caring mc or a manipulative mc, many times it feels like the mc is bipolar when sometimes he is manipulative and other times he feels the need to be a hero or be heroic. Most of the stuff I write here isn't anything major, just a little bit of me being nitpicky. All in all a pretty good story.👍👍

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Erick_Espinoza
Erick_EspinozaLv1

GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD

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The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4

Some of its plagerized and the rest is just garbage have a nice day

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SaberSongTrice
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I drop this story after chapter 16, MC becomes so low that he reveal all his ability 🤮🤮

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