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So far, this novel has a really cool concept. I would love to see the MC grow more and get more creative with his challenges, keep up the good work and I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next!

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The storyline and its development is interesting and indeed, a page turner. I've seen no major grammar issues throughout the chapters. Great start! Looking forward to more. 👍👍👍

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Everything seems like a great start for something great. I also like the pace since I'm inclined to faster paced novels instead of slow ones. The mystery about his father's death is interesting but I'm more interested in what he could achieve with the help of the Great Library. I can see him becoming overpowered not just in overall strength but also wisdom and knowledge. I wonder if there's also a knowledge on how to create a dyson sphere in the library 🤣🤣.

The story is still relatively short at 20 chapters, but I think its writing style is consistent and has not many grammar issues. The concept of a library from the future is interesting and could be entertaining for kingdom building.

To be honest, when I read the prologue I thought that this was one of those random cliche novels, but nope! Once I read the other chapters, I started to like the story. The writing method is simple with not many complicated words on it, which makes it easier for me to understand and more enjoyable to read. Also, the characters are nice. I like the MC already. He is smart and gets things fast. AANNNDDD I want a library from the future as well so that I can invent Teleport. Then, I wouldn't need to spend two hours going to and coming back to the university!

The concept is really amazing and I believe the author when he said that he will improve this work! Looking forward for more details in the story. [img=recommend]

Author here with his shameless review. I know you also notice the strange way this has been written. I have planned to make this a casual writing. I promise to improve the story and the description soon! Give my other novel a try! The name is A System For The Richest

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This story has potential. The idea is interesting, the characters is good and have room to grow. It is not a bad story at all. The problem is just the pace of the story. It's too fast. The plot could be stretch longer.