Rebirth in a Magical World

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I hope you will continue to write this story and not just drop it. I like the fact that the mc is older than harry is because it gives a different perspective to the whole plot. Him(mc) not being able to read the 7th book is a nice idea beacuse he will not be able to distrupt the cannon. I hope you will not make the progagonist overpowered by stupid means(students after 7 years at hogwarts are not so powerful magician, i dont think even voldemort would be powerful enough to take an good auror in a 1v1) You shoul take into considiration the abilities of wizards from FBAWTFD 2 movies beacause the portray what a wizard is capeable of better than the origional story. My suggestions are to show through this story a magical world not seen with the books(its really narrowly portrayed) but that u still stay into "logical" boundaries of what jk envisioned, also i hope you dont make him the triwizard tournament champ or some "good" slytherin.

Read it. New, more realistic approach than insta overpowerd or "know-it-all" MC storys. The MC in this Nocel doesnt learn the Spells like eating popcorn. Trial by error and learning. No golden Trio so far -> No Ron (major +) Mc is in the same year as Gred and Forge but is in Ravenclaw instead the beaten Horse Griffindor. The characters are written in a way which you think how normal humans would act or how "wizards" would act. Furthermore ( muhaha *sip from cup of tea ) is the story more inclined to the books than the movies. Who ever read this review, have a nice Day and a warm Cup of Tea.

The story is great, but has one glaring flaw. All of the male characters are total doormats, not one of them is assertive. All of the female characters are dictators yet somehow still attracted to these doormat male characters. The male characters have almost no agency. It's off putting.

The writing quality is amazing there are barely grammatical error, however the story plotlines are actual dogshit straight and utter dogshit, I mean the fawley ring has anti-summoning Enchant and an enchanment that makes it so only Fawleys can wear it yet people can just take it off your finger? No that's bullshit I mean there had to be an enchanment that makes it so it can't be taken off other than the wearer. Then the whole war council bullshit, I mean at least try to be secretive you just stay there with a "sly grin" and instantly they know it's you, utter bullshit, if your family had problems with their you don't solve it with petty pranks and bullshit, no you plan and obliterate his reputation, then he gets no allied and is easy pickings. Don't forget the dumbass of an mc basically spent 10 years so by jackshit, I mean when he gets his wand he had to practice wand movements? You'd think he'd do it with a stick it something? And the whole "I want to be an animagi" so he asks Mcgonigal, however she says you can't do it until 5-6th year, yet he talks about ugaudu having 80% of their student being anamagi at 14, holy shit ask your aunt to go teach you, I mean ?? You day these things and don't take advantage of the things your given and your family, it's just fucking stupid tbh.

It's incredibly suspect that there is barely any negative reviews for this novel and almost every review is just jerking the author off constantly so the author is either deleting negative reviews or this novel is somehow God's gift to mankind and can people seriously stop saying you can't find love in high school or middle school or whatever because I've seen a couple comments where people are constantly saying "don't have romantic interest until he's older because your first love never works out" please stop trying to force your love life on other people just because your first love dumped you doesn't mean everybody has the same experiences

Don’t bother reading if the reincarnation interests you 70 chapters in the MC has them all removed for a bull**** reason and comically the writer defending the terrible decision of cutting the foundations of the story off.

I'm amazed at the quality of this story right from the first chapter. Story takes its time in establishing the MC before 'the main plot' and his background. So many fics tend to kill off the family either for convieniense or tragic backstory. This fic thoroughly expands upon the family and makes them both important AND interesting to the plot, while giving a wholesome family experience. Also, the humor of the MC and other characters is hilarious :D Writing quality is top notch, despite small errors like occasional typo. Big points for also expanding upon the world background! Fanfics have the advantage of readily established world, but people rarerly add anything substantial to it other than popular theories or ones of their own, using principles of other fictions on the ways of their story, etc. This story instilled lot of fitting things in the world. Great story so far, definetley give it a read if you're into HP books!

One of the best FF of Harry Potter. Nothing much to say, everything is good. Just read it and you'll see. Due to the system of webnovel, the visibility is weak because the update is long.

It's nice to read a more serious Harry Potter fanfic, without much crazy travel ... I think it's cool that the author is following the logic of the world and just complementing with his ideas. Release more chapters !!

I'm guessing this is your first story so I'll encourage you, hope the novel & you wont disappoint me. Thx for your time Bat Sjbdofbhdokbehdjvdudiqvusjbfvdhsibdhdidbdhsijdvdhvirusknjfhfiuhfudjosshyhensihvejnejdodjddhdudbnmocnnzinebshsbbdmsobsnkdbuebeowyeveishdbrbdhwiisbebudiw

I like it a lot. Great relationships with the characters. I also like that the protagonist is still very child-like despite the second life. Nice setting-up for the plot. Has good flow.

So far I have enjoyed this story greatly its funny and very engaging. ......................................................................................

One of the best But sadly 😥 very slow update I hope he doesn't drop this novel ssssssssddsssssssssssssssssss Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa fdrtghuujvcftyhvccftyggfftycftycf

One of the top hp fanfics I have ever read. I hope the author is okay and is able to continue this amazing story

Hey, I caught up with the releases and I’m here to tell my thoughts. I first read this series, because of a review I read. I don’t remember who said it or when, but they said this series was better than the original Harry Potter books. At first, I was offended. How could you down grade J. K. Rowling’s work like that? I had originally intended to not read this, but decided to look at the reviews. After reading that review I was sure I wanted to skip this, but then I thought about why someone might say that and gave it chance. I was glad I did. I enjoyed this series as much as J. K. Rowling’s work. I read it in a few days and can’t wait for more.

I Have read many harry potter fan fics most of them are shit where the mc abuses his powers or builds a harem.But this book had me screaming in delight as it explores the harry potter world the mc is just like another kid learning magic he needs help which makes him more beleivable. The Ravenclaw trial is awesome. AUTHOR PLS KEEP UPDATING FAST I CANT WAIT.

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The concept is great and well fleshed out at the risk of being somewhat... Slow. The amount of prehogwards chapters are numerous, so it was quite refreshing when he finally got there. That said... I felt like I was reading someone's childhood biography till then. I can only hope that the remainder of the hogwarts years will fix that overall impression. The MC is strongly fleshed out with his friends the side characters being fleshed out to the point of your avarage ff character. The result of which is a fic that feels rich in its make and more like a novel. The biggest pet peeve I have with this story is the writing quality. Whilst it is better than most non native English speaking writers, it really should get copy pasted into grammerly before each submission, just to get the worst stuff out. Most common however are words being replaced for the wrong ones which destroy a sentence structure to the point worthy of a puzzle. A trunk becoming a truck is not too bad but when the words that glue the sentence together get replaced by completely random ones, it can lead to some major disorientation and sometimes completely having to ignore a sentence due to its unclear nature. That said I like the storytelling and structure of the story, it also seems to be progressing into more mature waters rather than childhood stuff. I hope it gets updated soon and frequently. Primarily because it's a slow story and those are hard to follow when the time between postings gets too big.

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