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hhhhz45
hhhhz45Lv135yr
2019-07-10 06:08

I hope you will continue to write this story and not just drop it. I like the fact that the mc is older than harry is because it gives a different perspective to the whole plot. Him(mc) not being able to read the 7th book is a nice idea beacuse he will not be able to distrupt the cannon. I hope you will not make the progagonist overpowered by stupid means(students after 7 years at hogwarts are not so powerful magician, i dont think even voldemort would be powerful enough to take an good auror in a 1v1) You shoul take into considiration the abilities of wizards from FBAWTFD 2 movies beacause the portray what a wizard is capeable of better than the origional story. My suggestions are to show through this story a magical world not seen with the books(its really narrowly portrayed) but that u still stay into "logical" boundaries of what jk envisioned, also i hope you dont make him the triwizard tournament champ or some "good" slytherin.

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Jmwells2003
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I definitely want to stay within the power levels that J.K Rowling described, Nothing drives me crazier when people break the rules of a novel in a fanfic. Although I would be willing to bet Lord Voldemort could take a auror on by his 7th year. Anyways I am glad you are enjoying the novel so far, no plans to drop it, I already have thought out overall story plot.

Fuzzypeach
FuzzypeachLv14

I would add that, there are no rules saying that the book has to end after the 7 years in Hogwarts or the 8 years until Voldemort’s defeat in Harry’s hands, especially since we have a story that is not exclusively tied in with Harry’s story.

Fuzzypeach
FuzzypeachLv14

By this I mean continue doing a good work. No need to forcefully rush anything

chickenlit
chickenlitLv14

Everyones leaving such good replies but i want to say wtf is that abbreviation

chickenlit
chickenlitLv14

Everyones leaving such good replies but i want to say wtf is that abbreviation

hhhhz45
hhhhz45Lv13

Fantastic beasts and where to find them thou i put d insted of t

rpkrrish
rpkrrishLv14

Zopp ty

xunlovesyou
xunlovesyouLv3

Is it a harem? I hope not

Kingsav_Savage
Kingsav_SavageLv12

In hogwarts u dont learn nothing too do with battles only flying and maybe turning a pillow too rock or match too steel they r all weak lets be honest

JACRAC1
JACRAC1Lv13

Any romance or is it an mc who only focuses on his goal nothing else P.S i haven't read the book yet

Jmwells2003:I definitely want to stay within the power levels that J.K Rowling described, Nothing drives me crazier when people break the rules of a novel in a fanfic. Although I would be willing to bet Lord Voldemort could take a auror on by his 7th year. Anyways I am glad you are enjoying the novel so far, no plans to drop it, I already have thought out overall story plot.
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