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Fantasy: Critical Compensation For Giving Away Opportunities

作者: Fantasy Critical
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Su’en is the most senior disciple of the Dao Sect in the Heavenly Domain, despite being of average talent. However, he stumbled upon a Critical Compensation system: Whenever he gave up his opportunities to others, he would obtain Critical Compensations, multiplying his gains and rewards. [Congratulations on giving up a Foundation Establishment Pill. You have unlocked a hundredfold Critical Compensation. You have gained 100 Foundation Establishment Pills!] [Congratulations on giving up a Xuan Rank technique. You have unlocked a thousandfold Critical Compensation. You have gained a Heaven Rank technique!] [Congratulations on giving up the egg of a Nine-tailed Owl. You have unlocked a Critical Compensation. You have gained the egg of the divine beast: the Vermillion Bird!] … Su’en’s junior Ye Lingyun declared, ”Senior, you have done so much for you. In order to repay you, I must marry you!” The other disciples of the sect announced, “We, the younger generation of the Dao Sect, will bow to no one but Senior Su!” The Empress of the Sky Demon Sect demanded, ”You gifted me the Emperor Rhyme Purple Gold Lotus, the only one of its kind in the world. And you claim I am nothing to you?” Su’en looked at the two divine maidens—one good, one evil, both beholden to him in devotion. He said, “Maybe I am selfish after all.”

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I'm usually never on Webnovel anymore so take my words with a grain of salt. I've read the raws up to chapter 300 and the main thing that you'll recognize is the fact that there are no other generations other than the elder generation and the younger (mc's) generation. This is a big problem in many cultivation novels, especially when you have an event that decides the leader of the entire domain that takes place every 800 years, but only those who are under 30 can participate. This is incredibly illogical and I'm not sure why the author does this. Another thing to note is the absolute rizz that the mc has. Romance in this novel can be simplified into a plain harem, such that the process for love in this cultivation world only equates to 1. love for a man and 2. the man must be handsome and strong. It's not complex type of love, and it's for sure not uncommon, which is why this novel does it terribly when you realize all the rewards that the Mc gives (except for the disciples of the sect) are all women. The author has a personal bias, and although the gift-giving can be used as a plot device to instigate love, I would think that instead, a harem should involve a complex net of emotions that tie all the individuals involved together. This novel does not do that as of yet, and the women that are dao companions of the MC default to "he is so handsome and strong so he will get more women other than me" and completely accept it, without respite or jealousy, which I find unnatural and amusing. Last thing that saves this novel is the cheat, which is no different from any of the same kind, but with any cheat cultivation novels I enjoy it's about the same experience. Really all that matters to me is whether I enjoy the cheat, and I did, so it's alright. Still pretty garbage tho.

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