Alanray64

Well enough said. Do your best👍

Geez that is depressing.. feel like saying Nigel no friends 😂 Well I am sure you can find someone, suffice to say you should have at least one confident. Just don’t the chance 👍

Well maybe one of your peers, other authors etc. you will find it invaluable and potentially thought provoking if given ideas. It is worth a try 👍

Fair enough. Just don’t take it personally otherwise it will affect your mindset on writing. Take it as constructive criticism.. you could always ask a mate to read over your writings to help before posting chapters.

Hey if you wanna improve then look at the free editing you are getting. Readers like a smooth ride not a lot of bumps which are jarring. I’ve skipped a number of them if I recall, but that one was quite bad 👍

..a thought appeared in my mind.. Very bad grammar

Ooo now I’m getting it. Good stuff 👍

Ok that bit is confusing? What is this inferring

..chill bottle..

This is seriously sad. His internal monologue is very grating, in fact, it is just plain annoying.