Item: Fantasy: Critical Compensation For Giving Away Opportunities
Rating: 1
Author: Saad_Yousuf

Saad_YousufLv42yr

2022-10-12 18:25

Give away your beautiful bride and gain a world level beauty, Give away your mother and you will gain a father,give away your job and you will get retirement. Give away your pipi and your mother will never again call you son.

Fantasy: Critical Compensation For Giving Away Opportunities

Fantasy Critical

4.1

40 Chs

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RhongomynaidLv1

A part of me wonders if this is a part of a conspiracy by scientists to test the limits of what Webnovel readers can read. If you're looking to be mildly entertained then I'm afraid this novel isn't for you since this isn't even capable of that, this novels greatest moments are lukewarm at best. There's not even a shred of originality to be found here, all we've got really is just a tepid rehash of the other 5 million "Critical Chance Multiplication" novels out there. It's hard to criticise the story or any other element of this novel really because they all feel non existent or blank, it isn't easy to dissect the novel equivalent to a sheet of white paper with some squiggly lines on it but I'ma try anyways. There is literally NO story. There is no world building (it's literally the same generic world you see in every other cultivation novel). There are no characters that aren't copypasted. This feels like reading a whole lot of nothing. If this novel was a spice, it'd be flour. I'd bet good money on me forgetting quite literally everything about this novel after I wake up tomorrow, this novel has been a mind numbingly forgettable experience. 0.5/5

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