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Ravi_Shankar131103
Ravi_Shankar131103Lv42yr
2022-05-11 17:35

providence troupe??.....lets hope its good...raw..............................................................................................................................................................................................

Fantasy: Critical Compensation For Giving Away Opportunities

Fantasy Critical
4.1
40 Chs

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Rhongomynaid
RhongomynaidLv1

A part of me wonders if this is a part of a conspiracy by scientists to test the limits of what Webnovel readers can read. If you're looking to be mildly entertained then I'm afraid this novel isn't for you since this isn't even capable of that, this novels greatest moments are lukewarm at best. There's not even a shred of originality to be found here, all we've got really is just a tepid rehash of the other 5 million "Critical Chance Multiplication" novels out there. It's hard to criticise the story or any other element of this novel really because they all feel non existent or blank, it isn't easy to dissect the novel equivalent to a sheet of white paper with some squiggly lines on it but I'ma try anyways. There is literally NO story. There is no world building (it's literally the same generic world you see in every other cultivation novel). There are no characters that aren't copypasted. This feels like reading a whole lot of nothing. If this novel was a spice, it'd be flour. I'd bet good money on me forgetting quite literally everything about this novel after I wake up tomorrow, this novel has been a mind numbingly forgettable experience. 0.5/5

2yr

Easycall
EasycallLv4

mtl please ...........................................................................................................................................

2yr
B0B1
B0B1Lv4

Raw...............................................................................................................................................

2yr
Valven
ValvenLv6

I'm usually never on Webnovel anymore so take my words with a grain of salt. I've read the raws up to chapter 300 and the main thing that you'll recognize is the fact that there are no other generations other than the elder generation and the younger (mc's) generation. This is a big problem in many cultivation novels, especially when you have an event that decides the leader of the entire domain that takes place every 800 years, but only those who are under 30 can participate. This is incredibly illogical and I'm not sure why the author does this. Another thing to note is the absolute rizz that the mc has. Romance in this novel can be simplified into a plain harem, such that the process for love in this cultivation world only equates to 1. love for a man and 2. the man must be handsome and strong. It's not complex type of love, and it's for sure not uncommon, which is why this novel does it terribly when you realize all the rewards that the Mc gives (except for the disciples of the sect) are all women. The author has a personal bias, and although the gift-giving can be used as a plot device to instigate love, I would think that instead, a harem should involve a complex net of emotions that tie all the individuals involved together. This novel does not do that as of yet, and the women that are dao companions of the MC default to "he is so handsome and strong so he will get more women other than me" and completely accept it, without respite or jealousy, which I find unnatural and amusing. Last thing that saves this novel is the cheat, which is no different from any of the same kind, but with any cheat cultivation novels I enjoy it's about the same experience. Really all that matters to me is whether I enjoy the cheat, and I did, so it's alright. Still pretty garbage tho.

2yr
Hungry_Reader
Hungry_ReaderLv13

I didn't even read a single chapter yet..But I keep giving this novel my Energy Stones 😂😂

1yr
Alanray64
Alanray64Lv15

Quite an enjoyable read, this novel is. I enjoy this type of theme, the critical return. It has been used in other novels, however I find each story, maybe similar, it delivers it’s own individuality for the reader to enjoy. So far only 20 trial chapters but I find myself wanting more to read. Hopefully it will be selected and be available for us to enjoy.

2yr
Palea
PaleaLv3

it has been 7 months since the last chapter. if you won't release more chs, then take it down already.

1yr
Axon_115
Axon_115Lv4

Why isn't webnovel picking it up?!?!?!?!?!

1yr
Mark_Humphrey
Mark_HumphreyLv15

if it ain't going to get released get it off the vote list and put something up that an author is going to care about

1yr
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