Damn, I Have to Marry the Strongest Antagonist at the Start?

Hi Author here, Sorry for being late, 5 stars because I want this review can be seen, The Images of characters will be shown below this review, and I'm working on them. U can ask me anything you want below this review! Besides, as for the SCHOOL TRANSMIGRATION, I cut it off because I suddenly realized I didn't pay much attention to the outline, SO as for this one, I do a lot effort in the outline, U can see this is another adventure of Owen, And hope U love this one TOO~

Writing quality is good but chatacters are 1-dimensional and world is unfurled as the mc progresses. Good for new readers or for time pass.... Too cliche for old daoists.......

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so its a good novel really good nice devlopment He IS a littel bit too arrogant For my taste and maybe He could schem a littel bit more and my bigest No IS the Harem Tag i am very sad about that i hope IT goes away in the Future 😁👍 sry For gramatic and yeah but all in all its a all its a good read

this novel is good the only downside is the powerscaling is very bad

Lots of people are being positive about this novel, but it is honestly extremely difficult to read, the mc is extremely arrogant with little to back it up, the author can't go two sentences without using a simile or metaphor. The whole thing feels almost impossible for a human to write. If you have nothing else to read then maybe give this novel a try but don't get your hopes up. I usually try and be give positive critism when I comment or review. This however I cannot think of anything you could change to fix this novel, good luck, I wish you all the best

It's good but it definitely could have been better. The MC seems to keep making dumb decisions whether it is stuff like forgetting to use a particular power or wasting fate points. though the main problem Is the plot inconsistencies, specifically the power scaling. At the point of the story where I am at, The MC is going toe to toe with early platinum level beast/prodigies yet just the killing intent of an inexperienced gold level character (which is a stage below platinum giving an immense gap) he( the mc) froze up, seemingly clouding his decision making 😮‍💨. Anyway there are plenty more chapters so maybe the author had fixed the problem but sadly I can't continue. Thank you and it was kinda entertaining.

An interesting concept for a novel. The writing style keeps you entertained, craving for more. I recommend you read this.

ntr ? yuri? I hope not. .. ..... . ..

Review after 125 chapter This story overall a good read. Story had really good start.. i was expecting a good quality mc and a stable story progress .. but after few chapter it was literally ruined.. There should be a limit how much plot armour help a MC.. MC makes too many dumb decisions, not cautious, troublemaker.. because of plot armour he is surviving which is annoying to watch everytime.. similar to those chinese young master's stories.. also power scaling at this point feels like meaningless... ;')

This has been bugging me more than it should have and I am sure I'm not the only one. Author if you don't look at comments, then I hope you take this one to heart and improve. Chapter 22 He's at 1850 Fate Points. He gains 4000 Points once he acquires the Queen Egg. 5850 Faint Points Total. Here's the weird part. He buys Order of Fire that is 600 FP Thats now 5250 FP. He then buys the Order of Fire Usage, Thunder Usage and Order Fusion Spell. He now has 1850 Faint Points left (says the chapter.) How is that possible? To give you an idea. Order of Thunder Usage is 2000 FPoints (Chapter 20 tells you so) Order Fusion Spell is 2000 FP (Chapter 19) We don't know how much Order of Fire Usage is but it's likely 2000 FP as well. Also when looking at the Status Screen it says he has the Order of Thunder Usage and Order Fusion Spell on Chapter 20. This is wrong. He only had 1900 FP during that Chapter and definitely didn't have FP over 1900 beforehand. I want to state This Isn't A Review on the novel. This is just me telling the author if you don't want people to drop your novel get the math right. Or better yet don't add in numbers if you keep getting it wrong. I do like your work don't get me wrong. It's just when you have minor errors like this, it adds up. I'll give a real review once I hit Chapter 100.

Overall worth trying but my biggest concern is the "HAREM" tag. Nvm please make mc fall for overpowering villainess only.....no fling or such ....both are so equally matched.

Overall I would suggest giving the novel a try but there are some caveats. A lot of the beginning is a bit clunky and some stuff is just straight up retconned/contradictory. It gets better, but was a bit annoying. This is more of like a 'shut your brain off and enjoy' type of novel so far; personally I'm going to continue it.

Authorrrr this is a Masterpiece in its genre ! I am genuinely surprised. I was expecting this to not be good and avoiding it thinking it would be stupid. Honestly if you like a MC who faces challenges and becomes stronger and stronger then its genuinely enjoyable I also like the Fl and MC love My only problem is this should be only one wife no harem romance and there are too many others after MC but as long as FL becomes more beautiful (higher cultivation/bloodline does that), and is more talented then anyone else then there is no need for harem. Also there is no way she should accept harem. I also feel the whole Raina situation shouldnt have happened but other than that all good

I am not going to say this is one of the “best books” I have read because it isn’t meant to be yet it still manages to be one of my favourites. It’s fast paced but doesn’t just skip through the very intricate parts needed for a story and the subplot of romance, In my opinion is done extremely well, something most writers fail to achieve. Through the dynamics and excellent writing the author achieved a great development throughout and an amazing story even with the more unconventional path the book follows. Definitely worth a read and a very unique way to take this.

I mean to ask the author does the Mc rest as he is fighting and just that

one of the best novel so far that i read.

Interesting story... Love to read it... 👍

author do you have discord ............

Overall a good read, and the story has a tight pace, but the powerscaling need to be refined a bit more. I'm also curious if the male and female protagonists will go their separate ways to level up. When will they be able to get married officially?