raizell24

you both should BRAKE it buddy

so around 50 ch just about a 8yo boy doing smut? that sounds like a total waste of time...thanks bro

late but mate, you are sucking for chinese even harder...loosen up bro unless you are getting paid for all that yappin

sure kid, every cu*k and sl*t use that word as a way out.insecure if you don't enjoy your partner having sexu* fu*king pleasure with another one (man/girl it didn't matter to me it is NTR)or insecure if you didn't let others enjoy her body. yep i hope to stay that insecure all life if it meant having my girl to myself.go and feel secure to everyone saying how much of a killer your wife is with that a**.

thanks for the infos tho i can't see myself going back to read it, i just can't like his character and if you read my review you will see that it's not only about her...it's him who make situations aweful to read.i don't enjoy reading an mc beating every male out there and turning to puppy whenever a female is in front of him and that's him. again thanks for confirming what happened later.

well,we all had that thought, (more like few actually)...but u know, author have to find the easiest way to tie their mc with 'heroined' and what a good 'forced' way than making mc plan to be near them seems as the only option.i don't understand why all of them choose this path, i mean i can go with one totally unrelated to heroines or main cast and make mc tied with a new oc...that would be more interesting than playing the good guy with hheroines ho killed you at some point.

and that was the point, system said that such a goal is something it can help him to reach thus it used 'undoubtly'

so lets keep it short, mc who will suck to naruto and hold his hand in everything nearly helping him by holding naruto's rod to discover hinata cave....(i am a fan of naruto) but the point of fanfics is to make things interesting. what's the point of reading this?

lol it's like a plague, every work they put hand on shall turn rotten.(tho there was some great works but the majority you won't be able to pass 30chps)..thanks for the review so i won't wastetime on this.{kinda expected it to relate to jin-woo when it said shadow mage

in novels? yeah i know i've already been poisoned so much from those types, and if i know its just a translation i would ingore it because they are mostly trash.