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Sesame_Cookies
Sesame_CookiesAuthor4mth
2024-07-29 13:10

Hi Author here, Sorry for being late, 5 stars because I want this review can be seen, The Images of characters will be shown below this review, and I'm working on them. U can ask me anything you want below this review! Besides, as for the SCHOOL TRANSMIGRATION, I cut it off because I suddenly realized I didn't pay much attention to the outline, SO as for this one, I do a lot effort in the outline, U can see this is another adventure of Owen, And hope U love this one TOO~

Damn, I Have to Marry the Strongest Antagonist at the Start?

Sesame_Cookies
4.4
438 Chs

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SYED_AFAQ
SYED_AFAQLv3

author do you have discord

4mth
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Breeze_
Breeze_Lv14

I don’t see the images, btw what is Leslie’s hair color you said blonde once then red once

4mth
Sesame_Cookies
Sesame_CookiesAuthor

red, the images are coming soon

Breeze_:I don’t see the images, btw what is Leslie’s hair color you said blonde once then red once
4mth
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YourDad_
YourDad_Lv4

It's been a week

Sesame_Cookies:red, the images are coming soon
4mth
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Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

Have you writen a lemon chapter yet in this novel?

Sesame_Cookies:red, the images are coming soon
4mth
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DaoistOfeOTA
DaoistOfeOTALv4

No the first “romance”(normal date) is at 96

Sabaroth_zarkiel:Have you writen a lemon chapter yet in this novel?
3mth
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Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

Then it's probably gonna take a long while I suppose anyway thanks for answering.

DaoistOfeOTA:No the first “romance”(normal date) is at 96
3mth
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DaoistOfeOTA
DaoistOfeOTALv4

No prob I always ask questions like that too and get left hanging so just wanted to help a brotha out

Sabaroth_zarkiel:Then it's probably gonna take a long while I suppose anyway thanks for answering.
3mth
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Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

quick question before I read further is there any yuri in the harem not a fan?

3mth
Vassitri
VassitriLv15

aaaaaand in chapter 8 Leslie is described as blonde with blue eyes.

Sesame_Cookies:red, the images are coming soon
3mth
Alphus_Silver
Alphus_SilverLv4

do you have discord , where are the images uploaded???

3mth
Evilwithin
EvilwithinLv4

How long are you planning this?

Sesame_Cookies:red, the images are coming soon
2mth
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Nightshade3108
Nightshade3108Lv3

is it soon now??

Sesame_Cookies:red, the images are coming soon
2mth
Jack_4352
Jack_4352Lv15

how big is the harem?

2mth
Ray_optics
Ray_opticsLv2

Author has done a fabulous job in this story. Though the lack of character images is very disheartening. Do you have a discord author? If yes then can I get an invite link?

1mth
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Agent_BJ
Agent_BJLv3

Images

1mth
Jack_4352
Jack_4352Lv15

is this really a harem?

1mth
Tiovaughn_Beckford
Tiovaughn_BeckfordLv4

is this really a harem bro the novel is in it's final stages and he only has one girl come on

1mth
Cultured_Daoist
Cultured_DaoistLv14

Did you have a debilitating stroke shortly after writing this novel??? Bc thats the only way I can fathom the asinine retconning dogsht you have by chap 20. Well I guess you could be a new breed of retarrd…. But it didn’t start that way.

1mth
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croixgolden
croixgoldenLv15

the images??

1mth
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Writing quality is good but chatacters are 1-dimensional and world is unfurled as the mc progresses. Good for new readers or for time pass.... Too cliche for old daoists.......

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Louis_reader_00001
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so its a good novel really good nice devlopment He IS a littel bit too arrogant For my taste and maybe He could schem a littel bit more and my bigest No IS the Harem Tag i am very sad about that i hope IT goes away in the Future 😁👍 sry For gramatic and yeah but all in all its a all its a good read

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BroMan987
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Lots of people are being positive about this novel, but it is honestly extremely difficult to read, the mc is extremely arrogant with little to back it up, the author can't go two sentences without using a simile or metaphor. The whole thing feels almost impossible for a human to write. If you have nothing else to read then maybe give this novel a try but don't get your hopes up. I usually try and be give positive critism when I comment or review. This however I cannot think of anything you could change to fix this novel, good luck, I wish you all the best

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undesignated
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It's good but it definitely could have been better. The MC seems to keep making dumb decisions whether it is stuff like forgetting to use a particular power or wasting fate points. though the main problem Is the plot inconsistencies, specifically the power scaling. At the point of the story where I am at, The MC is going toe to toe with early platinum level beast/prodigies yet just the killing intent of an inexperienced gold level character (which is a stage below platinum giving an immense gap) he( the mc) froze up, seemingly clouding his decision making 😮‍💨. Anyway there are plenty more chapters so maybe the author had fixed the problem but sadly I can't continue. Thank you and it was kinda entertaining.

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novelmeister
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o_Infinite_o
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Review after 125 chapter This story overall a good read. Story had really good start.. i was expecting a good quality mc and a stable story progress .. but after few chapter it was literally ruined.. There should be a limit how much plot armour help a MC.. MC makes too many dumb decisions, not cautious, troublemaker.. because of plot armour he is surviving which is annoying to watch everytime.. similar to those chinese young master's stories.. also power scaling at this point feels like meaningless... ;')

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Lucky0_0
Lucky0_0Lv12

ntr ? yuri? I hope not. .. ..... . ..

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