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BalsamicThunThighs
BalsamicThunThighsLv154mth
2024-09-06 11:00

This has been bugging me more than it should have and I am sure I'm not the only one. Author if you don't look at comments, then I hope you take this one to heart and improve. Chapter 22 He's at 1850 Fate Points. He gains 4000 Points once he acquires the Queen Egg. 5850 Faint Points Total. Here's the weird part. He buys Order of Fire that is 600 FP Thats now 5250 FP. He then buys the Order of Fire Usage, Thunder Usage and Order Fusion Spell. He now has 1850 Faint Points left (says the chapter.) How is that possible? To give you an idea. Order of Thunder Usage is 2000 FPoints (Chapter 20 tells you so) Order Fusion Spell is 2000 FP (Chapter 19) We don't know how much Order of Fire Usage is but it's likely 2000 FP as well. Also when looking at the Status Screen it says he has the Order of Thunder Usage and Order Fusion Spell on Chapter 20. This is wrong. He only had 1900 FP during that Chapter and definitely didn't have FP over 1900 beforehand. I want to state This Isn't A Review on the novel. This is just me telling the author if you don't want people to drop your novel get the math right. Or better yet don't add in numbers if you keep getting it wrong. I do like your work don't get me wrong. It's just when you have minor errors like this, it adds up. I'll give a real review once I hit Chapter 100.

Damn, I Have to Marry the Strongest Antagonist at the Start?

Sesame_Cookies
4.3
479 Chs

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Mahendra_Jajra_6110
Mahendra_Jajra_6110Lv3

hi I am from approx chapter 55 and here author is switching the tier of fl like it's nothing again and again and it's getting on my nerves now ..... first it was number calculation... now he is changing tiers again and again and this is not the first time he has done it.... novel is all good and fine but it's getting annoying after continuous mistakes... I want give it a good rating but if these annoying things don't stop in the upcoming chapter I will drop the novel with a very bad review... oh author if u read this I want to say that it's getting hard to imagine a fight or anything if u change it again and again

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BalsamicThunThighs
BalsamicThunThighsLv15

I'm currently on Chapter 69 and I'm having trouble reaching to chapter 100 lol

Mahendra_Jajra_6110:hi I am from approx chapter 55 and here author is switching the tier of fl like it's nothing again and again and it's getting on my nerves now ..... first it was number calculation... now he is changing tiers again and again and this is not the first time he has done it.... novel is all good and fine but it's getting annoying after continuous mistakes... I want give it a good rating but if these annoying things don't stop in the upcoming chapter I will drop the novel with a very bad review... oh author if u read this I want to say that it's getting hard to imagine a fight or anything if u change it again and again
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It's good but it definitely could have been better. The MC seems to keep making dumb decisions whether it is stuff like forgetting to use a particular power or wasting fate points. though the main problem Is the plot inconsistencies, specifically the power scaling. At the point of the story where I am at, The MC is going toe to toe with early platinum level beast/prodigies yet just the killing intent of an inexperienced gold level character (which is a stage below platinum giving an immense gap) he( the mc) froze up, seemingly clouding his decision making 😮‍💨. Anyway there are plenty more chapters so maybe the author had fixed the problem but sadly I can't continue. Thank you and it was kinda entertaining.

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o_Infinite_o
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Review after 125 chapter This story overall a good read. Story had really good start.. i was expecting a good quality mc and a stable story progress .. but after few chapter it was literally ruined.. There should be a limit how much plot armour help a MC.. MC makes too many dumb decisions, not cautious, troublemaker.. because of plot armour he is surviving which is annoying to watch everytime.. similar to those chinese young master's stories.. also power scaling at this point feels like meaningless... ;')

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