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raizell24
raizell24Lv47mth
2024-08-30 18:35

Interesting plot and characters although it resemble a lot of donghua works.Clear writing style and story flow albeit with a chinese touch, like mobs blabbering amidst the fight which supposed to be fast yet they talked a ton about how powerful this and that before the skill hit the target. And courting death ofc.Systeme had good reward but also a slave systeme that guide every mc step and if he didn't goes its way the failure is 'death'.What's the point of all those many god-tier reward if the systeme decide how you live, who you should love and who to submit to?.Lastly and the most irritating part is the usual pet mc. Who against 'males' even way higher-levels than him he pulled something out of his as* to defeat them acting like a chad.And against this called fiancée that the systeme forced him into? Without a single thought he submit and became a pet doing as she ordered.True she is strong but aren't the others before who he defeat were stronger? He didn't plan nor try to figure a way out...like usual she's beauty and he didn't mind being under her but above all others lol.3/5 for the chapters i enjoyed before meeting her and turning to 'yes ma'am' mc.

Damn, I Have to Marry the Strongest Antagonist at the Start?

Sesame_Cookies
4.2
574 Chs

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james_Blonde
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horrendous_potato
horrendous_potatoLv4

I agree with you on most of what you said though I do want to point out that eventually he does enter into a genuine relationship with his wife and no longer acts as her subordinate. in fact his wife was even willing to give him the entire kingdom, which she worked hard for many years to take control of, just to show her sincerity in starting over and becoming like an actual couple.

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horrendous_potato
horrendous_potatoLv4

Also the as of chapter 156 the system has only given him like 4-5 missions(a lot of which being things he was gonna do already anyways) so its not too overbearing and a lot of the times I forget that its even capable of giving him missions

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raizell24
raizell24Lv4

thanks for the infos tho i can't see myself going back to read it, i just can't like his character and if you read my review you will see that it's not only about her...it's him who make situations aweful to read.i don't enjoy reading an mc beating every male out there and turning to puppy whenever a female is in front of him and that's him. again thanks for confirming what happened later.

horrendous_potato:Also the as of chapter 156 the system has only given him like 4-5 missions(a lot of which being things he was gonna do already anyways) so its not too overbearing and a lot of the times I forget that its even capable of giving him missions
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Polochampion
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If you want a MC who isn’t unreasonably arrogant and doesn’t differentiate between men and women in fights I would recommend. “Global Beast Mastery: Only I Can See The Hints”

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raizell24
raizell24Lv4

thanks man, i apperciate it. will give it a try

Polochampion:If you want a MC who isn’t unreasonably arrogant and doesn’t differentiate between men and women in fights I would recommend. “Global Beast Mastery: Only I Can See The Hints”
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Sesame_Cookies
Sesame_CookiesAuthor

Hi Author here, Sorry for being late, 5 stars because I want this review can be seen, The Images of characters will be shown below this review, and I'm working on them. U can ask me anything you want below this review! Besides, as for the SCHOOL TRANSMIGRATION, I cut it off because I suddenly realized I didn't pay much attention to the outline, SO as for this one, I do a lot effort in the outline, U can see this is another adventure of Owen, And hope U love this one TOO~

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BloodPunisher
BloodPunisherLv13

Writing quality is good but chatacters are 1-dimensional and world is unfurled as the mc progresses. Good for new readers or for time pass.... Too cliche for old daoists.......

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BroMan987
BroMan987Lv14

Lots of people are being positive about this novel, but it is honestly extremely difficult to read, the mc is extremely arrogant with little to back it up, the author can't go two sentences without using a simile or metaphor. The whole thing feels almost impossible for a human to write. If you have nothing else to read then maybe give this novel a try but don't get your hopes up. I usually try and be give positive critism when I comment or review. This however I cannot think of anything you could change to fix this novel, good luck, I wish you all the best

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Louis_reader_00001
Louis_reader_00001Lv15

so its a good novel really good nice devlopment He IS a littel bit too arrogant For my taste and maybe He could schem a littel bit more and my bigest No IS the Harem Tag i am very sad about that i hope IT goes away in the Future 😁👍 sry For gramatic and yeah but all in all its a all its a good read

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Abid_Azzaky
Abid_AzzakyLv4

this novel is good the only downside is the powerscaling is very bad

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undesignated
undesignatedLv13

It's good but it definitely could have been better. The MC seems to keep making dumb decisions whether it is stuff like forgetting to use a particular power or wasting fate points. though the main problem Is the plot inconsistencies, specifically the power scaling. At the point of the story where I am at, The MC is going toe to toe with early platinum level beast/prodigies yet just the killing intent of an inexperienced gold level character (which is a stage below platinum giving an immense gap) he( the mc) froze up, seemingly clouding his decision making 😮‍💨. Anyway there are plenty more chapters so maybe the author had fixed the problem but sadly I can't continue. Thank you and it was kinda entertaining.

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novelmeister
novelmeisterLv15

An interesting concept for a novel. The writing style keeps you entertained, craving for more. I recommend you read this.

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o_Infinite_o
o_Infinite_oLv3

Review after 125 chapter This story overall a good read. Story had really good start.. i was expecting a good quality mc and a stable story progress .. but after few chapter it was literally ruined.. There should be a limit how much plot armour help a MC.. MC makes too many dumb decisions, not cautious, troublemaker.. because of plot armour he is surviving which is annoying to watch everytime.. similar to those chinese young master's stories.. also power scaling at this point feels like meaningless... ;')

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Prithwy_rai
Prithwy_raiLv4

Overall worth trying but my biggest concern is the "HAREM" tag. Nvm please make mc fall for overpowering villainess only.....no fling or such ....both are so equally matched.

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