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raizell24
raizell24Lv45mth
2024-08-30 18:35

Interesting plot and characters although it resemble a lot of donghua works.Clear writing style and story flow albeit with a chinese touch, like mobs blabbering amidst the fight which supposed to be fast yet they talked a ton about how powerful this and that before the skill hit the target. And courting death ofc.Systeme had good reward but also a slave systeme that guide every mc step and if he didn't goes its way the failure is 'death'.What's the point of all those many god-tier reward if the systeme decide how you live, who you should love and who to submit to?.Lastly and the most irritating part is the usual pet mc. Who against 'males' even way higher-levels than him he pulled something out of his as* to defeat them acting like a chad.And against this called fiancée that the systeme forced him into? Without a single thought he submit and became a pet doing as she ordered.True she is strong but aren't the others before who he defeat were stronger? He didn't plan nor try to figure a way out...like usual she's beauty and he didn't mind being under her but above all others lol.3/5 for the chapters i enjoyed before meeting her and turning to 'yes ma'am' mc.

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Noirit_K
Noirit_KLv4

Wow, that sounds like shit.

james_Blonde
james_BlondeLv3

🙂🤣

Noirit_K:Wow, that sounds like shit.
horrendous_potato
horrendous_potatoLv4

I agree with you on most of what you said though I do want to point out that eventually he does enter into a genuine relationship with his wife and no longer acts as her subordinate. in fact his wife was even willing to give him the entire kingdom, which she worked hard for many years to take control of, just to show her sincerity in starting over and becoming like an actual couple.

horrendous_potato
horrendous_potatoLv4

Also the as of chapter 156 the system has only given him like 4-5 missions(a lot of which being things he was gonna do already anyways) so its not too overbearing and a lot of the times I forget that its even capable of giving him missions

raizell24
raizell24Lv4

thanks for the infos tho i can't see myself going back to read it, i just can't like his character and if you read my review you will see that it's not only about her...it's him who make situations aweful to read.i don't enjoy reading an mc beating every male out there and turning to puppy whenever a female is in front of him and that's him. again thanks for confirming what happened later.

horrendous_potato:Also the as of chapter 156 the system has only given him like 4-5 missions(a lot of which being things he was gonna do already anyways) so its not too overbearing and a lot of the times I forget that its even capable of giving him missions
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