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Another Naruto (Dropped)

Author: Zorvog
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Dave Anderson, A poor soul who lost his parents when he was 8 years old, became a victim of a sudden death. [[[Fear not, he was given another chance at life.]]] His new life started when he was born on Octomber 10th as the son of Minato Namikaze and Kushina Uzumaki. The son of two legendary ninja. Let's see how he paves his own path through the Naruto World..... Join him in his journey to greatness!!! ------------------------- Do give this a read. Just look at the cover man, I worked hard on it. Obviously the Naruto pic is not mine. However, the poster is mine. I was messing around at first, but somehow it came brilliant. Don't you agree? PS: I own nothing in this novel. Furthermore, I started writing this for my personal satisfaction. Read it if you want. Mwuhahahaaa.

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Zorvog
ZorvogAuthorZorvog

Well, read and enjoy my dear readers. Also I gave myself five starts cuz why not?

VonBritannia
VonBritanniaLv14VonBritannia

good story. a bit concerned your trying yo make yo harem to big. think more than 4 would be to much. other than that no complants. rn its basically 9 tails, tenten, and hinita. hope tsunade is in. either way its yo choice. keep up the good work.

Lackada1sical
Lackada1sicalLv4Lackada1sical

Evaluation: Below Average. WQ: Several gramm errors which can be improved on as the story progress. Monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process. 3/5 SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. 2/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. MCs inaction to progress further by leaving the village is really lackluster and too dumb for my opinion just to follow the plot. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for NarutoVerse. Lacks utilization of NarutoVerse foreknowledge & his earth/previous life experiences. 2/5 US: Chapters are short, stability of update matches the quality of this FF. 4/5 WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 3/5 My opinion: Could've been better to make a new plot rather than doing the same thing as other Naruto FF. Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

Wachdog
WachdogLv4Wachdog

I am reading 16 episodes and in general, it is entertaining to read because the author follows almost all the ideas of his readers, he also has good grammar and makes everything go well, so this is just beginning and for the future it will be a very good story.

SarcasticGOD
SarcasticGODLv3SarcasticGOD

pretty good story plz dont drop and my earnest request is to post regularly.

GodOfLight
GodOfLightLv1GodOfLight

Evaluation: Below Average. WQ: Several gramm errors which can be improved on as the story progress. Monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process. 3/5 SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. 2/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. MCs inaction to progress further by leaving the village is really lackluster and too dumb for my opinion just to follow the plot. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for NarutoVerse. Lacks utilization of NarutoVerse foreknowledge & his earth/previous life experiences. 2/5 US: Chapters are short, stability of update matches the quality of this FF. 4/5 WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 3/5 My opinion: Could've been better to make a new plot rather than doing the same thing as other Naruto FF. Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

Flowerhead_Evan
Flowerhead_EvanLv4Flowerhead_Evan

I am really wondering right now if I am being biased or not 🤷‍♂️

_NOTE_
_NOTE_Lv2_NOTE_

It's overall a nice novel all Naruto fans must read it i am supporting you go on :)

Josh_Richie
Josh_RichieLv13Josh_Richie

The story development is good tbh, but the character design leaves more to be desired. he's or was an adult for god's sake and the way he readins is no way for an adult should reason. And this is simply a wish fulfilment ff but it's too much. What? if you wanted the full Otsustsuki package why didn't you just become a SI in the Uchiha, Senju, Hyuga or Uzumaki clan while also wishing for a chakra breeder reactor, that way we'll know what we came to read. this is just you destroying my perfect Naruto story. You're just redoing the whole Naruto plot with slight deviations. It gets boring fast NB: This isn't me being rude or overly criticizing you. This is my honest thoughts, author. do with it as you see fit.

HardKiller07
HardKiller07Lv4HardKiller07

le daré una oportunidad, porque? porque no? y le daré 5 estrellas, porque? por que no?

SORCERERSUPREME_7
SORCERERSUPREME_7Lv2SORCERERSUPREME_7

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Axon_115
Axon_115Lv4Axon_115

I have only read four chapters but I can say for sure that it has potential. So, Mr. Author please don't drop it and give it a good ending. That's all I had to say.... And one more thing... please update it regularly, that's my earnest request.

Suryaputra_Karna01
Suryaputra_Karna01Lv13Suryaputra_Karna01

This Is Great So Far But You Have To Update This Regularly And You Will Be Fine I Think And Please Bring Sakura In The Harem For She Was Naruto's First Love And Thank You For Great Work... hehehe

Alef_Biersack
Alef_BiersackLv2Alef_Biersack

Ah, the only bad thing is that it's been almost a month without releasing new chapters, ah, the story is good, it has few defects, the strength of the MC is realistic for those who know the plot.

Alex_Boen
Alex_BoenLv14Alex_Boen

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Lyson
LysonLv4Lyson

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KsoGhost
KsoGhostLv4KsoGhost

The author has done a great job when it comes to improving the quality of writing and is very open to constructive criticism on how to improve further.

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