VonBritannia

goated

sensational

I like it so far 11 chapters in. id just recommend making chapters longer. rn 2 chapters should be basically 1 if ya look at similar fanfics that did well. but keep it up

this shit was stupid. why does marvel Mc always go full emo. in the comics professor x is pragmatic af. he would have allowed the blood thing on the condition Mc doesn't go against them. he makes those types of deals all the time in the comics. I feel like people read a bunch of fanfics and assume that's how the real versions of these characters are.

Robin would be best fit if ya want one person. to show that dynamic of him breaking past the mental shackles of her fear of the marines and how he's different. would show great character growth and nice dynamic.

bro this shit is peak

gc

gc

easily best invincible fanfic. Just story wise and progression easily top 10 fanfic on this site ever. story moves so slow. the characters feel so real. the story is not a rehash of cannon with an observer but a story of its own. keep it up man. really good so far

the story has not moved passed chapter 3. every chapter is just constantly repeating the same shit over and over again like bro move the goddammit plot forward. I've genually never been more frustrated reading something.