Nano-Machine (DC X INVINCIBLE)

A great story so far. The pacing is pretty ok, sometimes it's fast but most of the time it takes its time. There are some grammar mistakes here and there, but they aren't much of a problem for any typical reader of web novels. The main character is pretty chill. He doesn't take stupid risks from what I can tell, even though he makes mistakes sometimes. He's quite cool, on another hand, his design is simple. The main character is powerful as well, and a hard worker who trains efficiently with his friend ECHO. He gains powers, but not willy-nilly either. He chooses from those he wants from now, not like he was at the beginning of the series... He isn't grossly powerful, but he is a force to be reckoned with. In a sense, he's just extremely strong Next, the world background seems decent so far, It isn't the best, but it is growing from what I can tell, so props to the author for that. The characters don't seem forced when they speak. It's pretty believable in fact, so double props. Chapters are quite long, averaging about 2-3k words per chapter, so content takes a while to run out of. Overall the story is pretty good to read, and if you like slow-mid pace fics with decent power progression and storytelling. For now, it seems like the story might be developing, but who knows, definitely not me[img=Smitten][img=proud]

Author wants an OP protagonist but also wants to nerf him, wants to use specific numbers to quantify the strength and speed of the character but doesn't understand what these numbers entail, wants a heroic MC that saves people and is reluctant to kill street thugs but is totally okay with genocide. For a webnovel it's above average.

Love the novel and hope someone else picks this up and continues writing. The Author wants to drop it since he just "found god." That is one of if not the most disgusting thing someone can say. Author is dropping it since DC/Invincible comics have characters that are gay and it goes against his religion since he just found god. Respectfully author never write a novel again since you will just keep disappointing people. One tip before I leave, don't let religion tell you what you can read or write about. It's your life and I doubt god would care.....

Is this a harem? I really hope not because I'm really liking the fic

Good story so far, I like how he has adapted to Gotham, hopefully you don’t have him become one of Bruce’s minions 👍🏾👍🏾

Revela spoiler

Good story, but unfortunately the "author" had his homophobic awakening while writing it... He became so afraid of gays, that their mere existence in DC, is somehow gonna make him a "sinner" by just writing his MC in said world (without ever mentioning anything about 1.gays 2.their relations 3.or even their existence in his work) Anyway read this or just the last chapter, if you are curious to see someone that the literal meaning of homophobia applies to, it was kind of facinating seeing such a case.

Love the novel and hope someone else picks this up and continues writing. The Author wants to drop it since he just "found god." That is one of if not the most disgusting thing someone can say. Author is dropping it since DC/Invincible comics have characters that are gay and it goes against his religion since he just found god. Respectfully author never write a novel again since you will just keep disappointing people. One tip before I leave, don't let religion tell you what you can read or write about. It's your life and I doubt god would care.....

Revela spoiler

Very slow but very progressive keep it up don’t spoil the flow in later chapters keep it up and also don’t increase the pace it is good 👍 👍👍👍

The author found "god " So he won't write a story about gay marriages which in all is a pathetic excuse. just say you don't know how to move forward with the story and drop it . why bring religion in as a wall for your cowardly behaviour of hiding behind religion.Author was taking about eternal damnation like come on thos he thing we are so stupid to believe his word after he writes 40 chapters and after all the idesasin his head is gone he fears for his soul

No matter how good this novel is don’t get your hopes up , author has a lot of excuses for dropping his novel and it’s not even good excuses, anyways story is aight just know author treats his novels like a piece of shit

The premise is interesting and would have made for a great read if it was not for the use of ai in it's creation, the horribly described scenes with illogical words has turned me from this story. The use of ai has degraded the writting so much so that I couldn't finish a single chapter, author please use your brain and select the appropriate words for each description, avoid describing the tone/ feelings of the charactors and show what they are feeling through action, don't overdescribe, use telling to denote long stretches of time that would have been boring for the reader, only use ai to correct your grammar, otherwise the story will end up feeling like it was written by an idiot with no idea how to use the english language to write a story.

Pacing is pretty stable and the mc actually feels like a real person which is for once. Though I'm wondering how the smooth the crossover is going to be cause I know those types of fics are pretty hard so good luck and I hope I see more chaps.

This story is main pitfall is it’s focus. Mainly the focus on power and relationships. The relationships or not why we read superhero stories. At least not romantic relationships. In most stories like this the relationships are at minimum tertiary. The villains, the plot, the setting, the powerset, or the intrigue are all more important than the romantic drama. It almost reads like a harem fic. The second issue is the powerset. I’m not gonna lie. I actually love it but to make it better I think he got a tone down a bit. His power should grow in conjunction with the story, because if he could solve all his problems with his powers, what would you write about? Another thing is that has powers that is mostly growing alone and that’s kind of uninteresting in the fic of the DC/invincible universe.

So is the Mc going to continue dating amber/ eventually marry her or going to break up soon. I would personally like a solo story with the interaction dc, and invincible character. Just my opinion.

I'm still trying to figure out how invincible adds into this but overall I love this.

Nano machine is it for the novel if so then i hope you don't disappear and don't mess up the fic like nano machine has so much potential i don't know why other author's don't use it.

nice fic and pacing....👍👍👍.....pls don't drop

can you give a vampire like ability to be able to pass on some of his power to people he cares about like how a vampire bite can make other a vampire as well you can make some adjustments to this ability to make it more inline with the story