A great story so far. The pacing is pretty ok, sometimes it's fast but most of the time it takes its time. There are some grammar mistakes here and there, but they aren't much of a problem for any typical reader of web novels. The main character is pretty chill. He doesn't take stupid risks from what I can tell, even though he makes mistakes sometimes. He's quite cool, on another hand, his design is simple. The main character is powerful as well, and a hard worker who trains efficiently with his friend ECHO. He gains powers, but not willy-nilly either. He chooses from those he wants from now, not like he was at the beginning of the series... He isn't grossly powerful, but he is a force to be reckoned with. In a sense, he's just extremely strong Next, the world background seems decent so far, It isn't the best, but it is growing from what I can tell, so props to the author for that. The characters don't seem forced when they speak. It's pretty believable in fact, so double props. Chapters are quite long, averaging about 2-3k words per chapter, so content takes a while to run out of. Overall the story is pretty good to read, and if you like slow-mid pace fics with decent power progression and storytelling. For now, it seems like the story might be developing, but who knows, definitely not me[img=Smitten][img=proud]
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Wow, I've seen shameless reviews but this takes it to another level
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which nano machine are we talking about the one from the Nano-Machine manhwa or Crysis Game
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