A great story so far. The pacing is pretty ok, sometimes it's fast but most of the time it takes its time. There are some grammar mistakes here and there, but they aren't much of a problem for any typical reader of web novels. The main character is pretty chill. He doesn't take stupid risks from what I can tell, even though he makes mistakes sometimes. He's quite cool, on another hand, his design is simple. The main character is powerful as well, and a hard worker who trains efficiently with his friend ECHO. He gains powers, but not willy-nilly either. He chooses from those he wants from now, not like he was at the beginning of the series... He isn't grossly powerful, but he is a force to be reckoned with. In a sense, he's just extremely strong Next, the world background seems decent so far, It isn't the best, but it is growing from what I can tell, so props to the author for that. The characters don't seem forced when they speak. It's pretty believable in fact, so double props. Chapters are quite long, averaging about 2-3k words per chapter, so content takes a while to run out of. Overall the story is pretty good to read, and if you like slow-mid pace fics with decent power progression and storytelling. For now, it seems like the story might be developing, but who knows, definitely not me[img=Smitten][img=proud]

Author wants an OP protagonist but also wants to nerf him, wants to use specific numbers to quantify the strength and speed of the character but doesn't understand what these numbers entail, wants a heroic MC that saves people and is reluctant to kill street thugs but is totally okay with genocide. For a webnovel it's above average.

Love the novel and hope someone else picks this up and continues writing. The Author wants to drop it since he just "found god." That is one of if not the most disgusting thing someone can say. Author is dropping it since DC/Invincible comics have characters that are gay and it goes against his religion since he just found god. Respectfully author never write a novel again since you will just keep disappointing people. One tip before I leave, don't let religion tell you what you can read or write about. It's your life and I doubt god would care.....

Good story so far, I like how he has adapted to Gotham, hopefully you don’t have him become one of Bruce’s minions 👍🏾👍🏾

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Good story, but unfortunately the "author" had his homophobic awakening while writing it... He became so afraid of gays, that their mere existence in DC, is somehow gonna make him a "sinner" by just writing his MC in said world (without ever mentioning anything about 1.gays 2.their relations 3.or even their existence in his work) Anyway read this or just the last chapter, if you are curious to see someone that the literal meaning of homophobia applies to, it was kind of facinating seeing such a case.

Love the novel and hope someone else picks this up and continues writing. The Author wants to drop it since he just "found god." That is one of if not the most disgusting thing someone can say. Author is dropping it since DC/Invincible comics have characters that are gay and it goes against his religion since he just found god. Respectfully author never write a novel again since you will just keep disappointing people. One tip before I leave, don't let religion tell you what you can read or write about. It's your life and I doubt god would care.....

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Very slow but very progressive keep it up don’t spoil the flow in later chapters keep it up and also don’t increase the pace it is good 👍 👍👍👍