The premise is interesting and would have made for a great read if it was not for the use of ai in it's creation, the horribly described scenes with illogical words has turned me from this story. The use of ai has degraded the writting so much so that I couldn't finish a single chapter, author please use your brain and select the appropriate words for each description, avoid describing the tone/ feelings of the charactors and show what they are feeling through action, don't overdescribe, use telling to denote long stretches of time that would have been boring for the reader, only use ai to correct your grammar, otherwise the story will end up feeling like it was written by an idiot with no idea how to use the english language to write a story.
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Will do that, however, chapters will take much, longer to come out, like the one I'm currently doing, since there will also be longer chapters than normal because of it. Ai only helps me to organize a bit, but since I was on some long hiatus' I needed it. Still, thanks for the feedback, well appreciated.
