Hanish_Ram

Please remove harem it will degrade the quality of novel and also don’t let system talk too much give mc autonomy or remove system give mc high iq or luck or sting body etc - no harem & no system the novel will be hit

No body trades with fake arm even if it is vibranium please change the plot atleast give him regenerative serum winter soldier already have this so this new arm makes mc less capable than winter soldier it undermine it’s presence

Mc is an idiot I guess if any one with much intelligence knows future they would have already be done but he is taking too much time and mc didn’t need any cheats he knows may so could have leveraged but no it is flaw in writing but no body is perfect in writing till now it was good but severing his own arm makes me believe mc is bit a lunatic or low eq with his intelligence this much effort to destroy these enemies till now he didn’t find shaw and Essex it shows the inability of usage of partial future knowledge

Why can’t he inform them atleast writer think I all ways don’t just modify the plot slightly and insert mc if mc knows the guardians are gonna dies why don’t he inform them in every invincible fanfiction the mc will let them die why? At least you writer can’t you change the stereotype plot of the fanfiction

In the world of quirks how can his drone invention be very dangerous this is definitely ai written plot I feel sorry if I am wrong

It’s all ai writing I guess same repeatitive tone of optimistic plot always mc will invent anything new and next day again same this feels definitely ai written chapters

But his family is not actually his he adopted them as a kindness for innocent children but how can he harm other innocent people this sounds very illogical in this novel and how scheming against this gangs involved death of innocent people actually no clear explanation it look as if written while drunk

Such weak mc and such waste and unexciting plot and also non real plot as per his powers. His no proper usage of his powers it’s better you rewrite

I don t know why his powers always don’t work sometimes they work and some times they don’t he can paralyse just by touching then why he couldn’t absorb omega red life force or there was no use of powers from both omega red and Tyson both had life force absorption but in no conflict of powers in previous chapter - that is why we shouldn’t be too dependent on Ai

In previous chapter didn’t he remove sharpnels how is this poisoning possible