Chapter 33 ANOTHER YAPP SESH!!!! Pros: 1) Portrayal of characters is pretty good and understandable 2) A pretty thought out reason for a majority of things 3) Really great start and hook Cons: 1) the increase in strength is too fast and ruins a lot of plot opportunities IMO. For ex; he trained in knife skills and he gets to the level of professional in a few weeks 2) not much world exploring beside going to gotham and then starlight city 3) The DC & Invincible(especially) main cast were not used or explored enough and all we have seen is just the mc going to fodders and gaining powers 4) the nano machine abilities further down were too OP imo 5) not a lot of struggle after the superman blood thingy( I think this was when things started getting boring and out of hand for me) Expectations starting out: 1) more struggle with growth in skills and strength 2) exploration of other places like altantis or the other pantheons of mythology 3) struggling with accepting his new reality( not a lot of fanfic do this so this is more preference than anything) 4) a lot of martials are being created and used Disappointments: 1) I did not see a lot of mention of martial arts being used and explained( I had this expectation because of the manhwa) 2) Little use of the invincible cast( we are not that far into the fic but I would’ve like to see more invincible) 3) Progression in the story got stale after a while because all I was seeing were numbers going up and not enough story telling about the world or the characters. Take it how you will and hopefully I see improvements as well as more of your fics.
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