With The Sharingan In The MCU

"David Blake was hit by a Nokia 3310" i read up to this and had a huge laughing fit! 😂🤣😂🤣 everything else doesn't matter! it goes to my reading list

"Sharingan is an overused power" welp seems like we are old

Nobody could ever survive being hit by a nokia. It was forged by the gods to be indestructible..........................................................

MC is a Ultra Simp and the kind of guy that let betrayal be easily forgiven and forgotten MC also have inconsistent powers Great Start but get worse every new chapter

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great FF you have loved the mc and he's chill don't want to dominate the world no evil or good plan just going with the flow chilll

It's not bad, but it's also not that good you have the typical trope like Mc was a Mercenary in his past life. It's only here to skip the trainings arc. And the mercenary doesn't like guns so he uses a Knife. It's your ordinary plot just to have cool moves I mean it's in the modern world and not AC Black Flag where you can slaughter 300 people in 10 Minutes with a blade.

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I like Sharingan in Marvel. I dislike bs power-up in the middle of the fight to compensate for the MC making a rookie mistake of unnecessarily alerting his opponents to his presence ahead of time. I also dislike x-men in MCU. Although they're both Marvel, the plots don't actually mesh all that well. I liked the light-hearted tone in the beginning, but that doesn't seem like it'll last... Anyways, it's not bad, but not really good either; just average.

Nokia... It's a weapon that can destroy abstract beings... It's surprising to see that MC can still be reincarnated after being hit by a god's weapon...

My personal opinion is that the story gets worst after the first volume. I had to reread the first chapter of the first volume 5 times to understand what was happening, and I still don’t. The first volume was great 4.5 out of 5, but I just don’t like the second volume.

Sigh.. the only problem for me is writting style: constant I moved, I sit, I catch, I run, I hit and so on... Because of this story feels like emotionless MC is telling his story in detailed report.

So far a story with a lot of potential, humor to improve on the other hand. Also hoping that he respects his publication deadlines that he announced himself

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its ok but not good the dialogues are pretty cringy it's hard to read at times the fic makes me want to punch the screen grammar is pretty bad i think the author should've checked it and had someone edit it before posting it

Perfect no broblem i definetly did not give 5🌟 becous nokia phone and the fact nokia was created in finland

Even if the whole "eyes" thing is over used it isn't necessarily a bad thing. He said he is new at this, so using an ability that the author can get more info on, i.e. other FanFics and anime, should be a better thing.

Great story, Like the writing as author have portrayed some interactions pretty real and cool, Downside I find that some character interaction are ’little’ forced, took me while to realise MC is edgelord, It will be better if there was a charcter description of his personality but I think author is still searching for it himself as some chapter he gave a good charcter vibe then other like some man child, more importantly those who don’t like Natasha as romace can sign out like me.

here for the eyes tbh, tho ill update this as we go also rinnegan? *wink**wink**nudge**nudge*

Writing Quality - Good Stability of Updates - Okay Story Development - Good but could be better Character Design - Good World Background - Movies Marvel