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this is the saddest thing bro, you could’ve resealed the 9 tails and none of this would’ve happened…. idk if it was written this way to force the plot but WTF.

Overall the writing is good, the only thing that brings the story down is the main character. Firstly, he doesn’t seem that emotionally mature, even after all the training he went through. Secondly, he seems like more of a fanboy than anything. He isn’t trying to make a place for himself in the story. Lastly, character interaction and a love interest was introduced way too early. The MC didn’t get to learn anything about himself or try to get stronger, and the love with 18 seemed kinda forced even if it meant nothing in the end,

This chapter is better 👍🏾

I feel like the combat was a bit anticlimactic for him to get quirk exhaustion, plus with him getting pushed back with infinity active. Chapter was overall iffy for me, especially since we have an unknown quirk in the story. looking forward to the next chapter

the china clan should have their own taijutsu style

i think the MC should be a bit more involved idk…

how about u make his main quirk the telekinesis and enhanced stats since it would actually make sense with him inheriting it from his mom. you can just level it up to be broken. also thx for the chapter

this shit so good man… i hope the mc is still alive cuz damn, this shit is PEAK. This is the type of stuff I open this app for. Plz don’t bring him back as a mindless villain…. gonna dive back in the water for more peak later…. You have cooked