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Amenonuhoko: Flowers Garden

Autor: StirDrem
Fantasy
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What is Amenonuhoko: Flowers Garden

Lesen Sie den Roman Amenonuhoko: Flowers Garden des Autors StirDrem, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.Rewrite of Amenonuhoko: Spear of Heaven--------------------------------Nayari, being an ex-pharmacist, after his two years long journey, he decided to go to school.He'd only hoped for a normal school ...

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Rewrite of Amenonuhoko: Spear of Heaven -------------------------------- Nayari, being an ex-pharmacist, after his two years long journey, he decided to go to school. He'd only hoped for a normal school life, but people who he knew and who he will know will start coming into his life once more. Will he be able to smile along side his friends, or be dragged down by the thing he had once caused?

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Jezzekiel
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RockSoup
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The writing quality was alright however there were many grammatical mistakes and unnecessary words were used. Another problem was the flow of the novel but as the chapter progressed the pacing became much better. Your updates are...interesting. But I can relate that exams are annoying. The vague points at the beginning will indeed intrigue the audience however if there is nothing binding them to learn more about the character such as development then it is quite difficult for readers to continue reading. Everything else seemed pretty much great.

DamnPlotArmor
DamnPlotArmorLv5DamnPlotArmor

Even though I see many flaws, I'll still give this story five stars to encourage a fellow author. As all authors have it, we made some typos and misused of words here and there. Author, you should install Grammarly program to help you on those parts or you can get an editor. (I also need an editor tbh) For the rest of the story, it's too early to tell. Some stories are late bloomer, such as Overgear or other novels. This story can be one of them. All in all, give it a try. The author has a unique way to present the story, so it might interest you.

awada141
awada141Lv5awada141

I am going to be honest in this. The way of writing is definitely new to my eyes. The idea is really great, and the plot is good so far. Try to enlarge the paragraphs a bit. But really a good one, keep it up! 👍

StirDrem
StirDremAutorStirDrem

Due to some minor and major changes in story details, I'll now focus on the rewrite instead of the original one. If anyone have supported the original novel, please support this one too as I'll be really grateful. I thank you for spending your time reading this and I hope you have a great day.

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