Even though I see many flaws, I'll still give this story five stars to encourage a fellow author. As all authors have it, we made some typos and misused of words here and there. Author, you should install Grammarly program to help you on those parts or you can get an editor. (I also need an editor tbh) For the rest of the story, it's too early to tell. Some stories are late bloomer, such as Overgear or other novels. This story can be one of them. All in all, give it a try. The author has a unique way to present the story, so it might interest you.
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