Review Detail of RockSoup in Amenonuhoko: Flowers Garden

The writing quality was alright however there were many grammatical mistakes and unnecessary words were used. Another problem was the flow of the novel but as the chapter progressed the pacing became much better. Your updates are...interesting. But I can relate that exams are annoying. The vague points at the beginning will indeed intrigue the audience however if there is nothing binding them to learn more about the character such as development then it is quite difficult for readers to continue reading. Everything else seemed pretty much great.