heliumjax
I deleted my old review and put this one to get something straight. For a while now I have been getting butthurt people talking about the one rape scene that appeared in the novel that went on for roughly four lines and wasn't even in detail. If another person starts to complain about that ****, I'm straight up deleting your comment or review immediately, I'm tired of it and I can't tolerate responding to toddlers on a constant basis, who just can't seem to handle something like that, but is fine when the main character commits mass murder right?. And to those that are telling other people to not read the novel for themselves because of a stupid reason or some randomness, or any reason in general, and without even taking into account that they are one person and people might like what they don't is disgusting and incompetent.
Phenomenal writing all around, from the grammar to the development. The only real downside to this story is the update speed, but it’s not like they’re getting paid to write it so who cares. Just appreciate that this person is bothering to write such an amazing story in the first place. Honestly though great job author can’t wait for more.
Honestly I agree it's too nerfed and the Martians aren't that op and also you should of stuck to hibernation and woke him up in the ancient Greece to make an impact on history so the league and the amazon's would find out about him in mythology fucking the gods lives and bringing terror beyond cronos,also I think you should right a fan fic about xenoblade chronicles 2 I really like mythra she's a tsundere you could make mc rex's older brother of 18 and got mythra while he got pyra,mythra is stronger though and don't nerf him just being with mythra is enough for the story.nerfing ruins a good story.
A Very Good Story, I just didn't like it when it allowed others to get some Meteor powers ... but it's good, at least they will spread their legacy to the world ... Overall a Story Very good. ⣾⣿⠿⠿⠶⠿⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣦⣤⣄⢀⡅⢠⣾⣛⡉⠄⠄⠄⠸⢀⣿. ⢀⡋⣡⣴⣶⣶⡀⠄⠄⠙⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣴⣿⣿⣿⢃⣤⣄⣀⣥⣿⣿ ⢸⣇⠻⣿⣿⣿⣧⣀⢀⣠⡌⢻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠿⠿⠿⣿⣿⣿ ⢸⣿⣷⣤⣤⣤⣬⣙⣛⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⣿⣿⡍⠄⠄⢀⣤⣄⠉⠋ ⣖⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⢇⣿⣿⡷⠶⠶⢿⣿⣿⠇⢀ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣽⣿⣿⣿⡇⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣶⣥⣴⣿ ⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡟ ⣦⣌⣛⣻⣿⣿⣧⠙⠛⠛⡭⠅⠒⠦⠭⣭⡻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⠃ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡆⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠹⠈⢋⣽⣿⣿⣿⣿⣵⣾⠃ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠄⣴⣿⣶⣄⠄⣴⣶⠄⢀⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠃⠄ ⠈⠻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡄⢻⣿⣿⣿⠄⣿⣿⡀⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣛⠛⠁⠄⠄ ⠄⠄⠈⠛⢿⣿⣿⣿⠁⠞⢿⣿⣿⡄⢿⣿⡇⣸⣿⣿⠿⠛⠁⠄⠄⠄⠄ ⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠉⠻⣿⣿⣾⣦⡙⠻⣷⣾⣿⠃⠿⠋⠁⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⢀⣠ ⣿⣶⣶⣮⣥⣒⠲⢮⣝⡿⣿⣿⡆⣿⡿⠃⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄. ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠟⠛⢉⢉⠉⠉⠻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠟⠠⡰⣕⣗⣷⣧⣀⣅⠘⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠃⣠⣳⣟⣿⣿⣷⣿⡿⣜⠄⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⠁⠄⣳⢷⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⣝⠖⠄⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⠃⠄⢢⡹⣿⢷⣯⢿⢷⡫⣗⠍⢰⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⡏⢀⢄⠤⣁⠋⠿⣗⣟⡯⡏⢎⠁⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⠄⢔⢕⣯⣿⣿⡲⡤⡄⡤⠄⡀⢠⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⠇⠠⡳⣯⣿⣿⣾⢵⣫⢎⢎⠆⢀⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⠄⢨⣫⣿⣿⡿⣿⣻⢎⡗⡕⡅⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⠄⢜⢾⣾⣿⣿⣟⣗⢯⡪⡳⡀⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⠄⢸⢽⣿⣷⣿⣻⡮⡧⡳⡱⡁⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⡄⢨⣻⣽⣿⣟⣿⣞⣗⡽⡸⡐⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⡇⢀⢗⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⣞⡵⡣⣊⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⡀⡣⣗⣿⣿⣿⣿⣯⡯⡺⣼⠎⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣧⠐⡵⣻⣟⣯⣿⣷⣟⣝⢞⡿⢹⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⡆⢘⡺⣽⢿⣻⣿⣗⡷⣹⢩⢃⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⠄⠪⣯⣟⣿⢯⣿⣻⣜⢎⢆⠜⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡆⠄⢣⣻⣽⣿⣿⣟⣾⡮⡺⡸⠸⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⡿⠛⠉⠁⠄⢕⡳⣽⡾⣿⢽⣯⡿⣮⢚⣅⠹⣿⣿⣿ ⡿⠋⠄⠄⠄⠄⢀⠒⠝⣞⢿⡿⣿⣽⢿⡽⣧⣳⡅⠌⠻⣿ ⠁⠄⠄⠄⠄⠄⠐⡐⠱⡱⣻⡻⣝⣮⣟
Good story, character development is decent but if he's only goal is to get stronger are more famous it will start to get boring, would be good to think about it. i mean at the point where the actual line of DC starts he will be (most likely) an apex being so everything would become blank and bland, i suppose a romance part or something else that could make the story progress in more than just one way would be great. Thanks for the hard work by the way
Okay so rly liked the idea of the story and is smilier to something I read before. Loved the initial chapters however when it got to the tribe then kingdom I found it all boring and useless. This to me took a massive turn And has turned me off as I liked the lone hunting style being peak of the planet. I mean whats the point of making a kingdom when your at the peak ? Not to mention he constantly complained about being bored but then spent 20+ years in the same place sitting in a mansion... Finally what made me drop mainly is the power he got from the meteor. For me the mc was like the strongest creature. Like kido from one piece, was looking forward to the future of the badass and how wonder woman etc would react to him and his history. Loved that he was solely physical with his main thing being evolution. But then you go and give him a tooth fairy power where he can do anything he imagines... Like what is the point of his being if he can do anything.. What I was hoping was the stone or whatever just gave him massive resistance to magic, god powers etc Then we can keep his badass self of strongest creature. A tank that can withstand anything, destroy anything. Plus you never see an mc that just evolves on a physical base without all these extra add ons, like mind reading, fire magic etc.. If you can ignore all the things I mentioned above or even like them then it is a good read, just not for me. Gl to author
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Love it :) What more is there to say?? Well I guess DONT DROP IT PLEASE -------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------------- --------------------------------vv
Well I'm late with my review things to do in their life so no complaints there. The story development huh 🤔, to me the story is developing pretty well it's not too fast and not too fast and not too slow, you know the characters are all pretty different to some degree I also like Spencer's now Alexander's development as a person he goes from a regular human to a being that thinks like a beast to who we have now. This is in the DC universe yes, but it doesn't immediately start where all the superheroes and supervillains are running around. The rape scene, the rape scene tsk, tsk, tsk. What are you guys fucking babies at the time in which he raped that woman it was as common as fucking trees, so why are you getting such a big head about it and for starters there is only one rape scene and there will be only one as clearly seen by Spencer's now Alexander's character development, also there are many novels and Fan Fictions with much more rape like seriously. Anyway if you give this Fan-fic a chance I promise you won't regret it 👍