Maybe it's just me? I get way to into stories so I notice tons of small details that add up to eventually annoy me xD I'm surprised nobody else has noticed it? I mean with Athena you can't really call what's given to her cheating as she got energy taken from her so she doesn't die. Then out of all the other player's howler has been given help from the gm/mc like what 5 times? Then given my initial dislike for him from his attitude etc (explained in other replies) It just rly stands out to me. For example, him saying he is the strongest learned from his pain etc etc but then if you take away the help he is average af I think it would have been much cooler for a new character to become the apprenticeship, maybe that new guy you mentioned? His character seems pretty dull so far... xD With you being biased towards Athena? Nah, I don't see it. All that you have helped her with so far is help from not overdosing. Everything else has been her intelligence. She hasn't even got cool parts? Only at the start and the rest is varied between different char. She only stands out more because she is the leader/tactician. But then because of these rolls, you would expect to see her more.
I get that, this is just my perception of him from the start that has made me dislike him immensely. Then with the sad backstory, it's to me, made as an excuse for him to act like this. Like a cope out if that makes sense? Made as something to give him away to act as he does... This makes me dislike him even more, then with all the cheats he gets given it just keeps adding on more and more dislike for him to me...
xD yes... I guess if it's like the first title then it's fine. I was just hoping for some cool titles for special things? So like, she is the first player, plus first to evolve. So she gets a title to signify this. Don't care about the general population, however some for the things they do get a cool af title? Hope that makes sense
Premis of the story is great, however, the thing that ruins it for me is that the English and grammar etc is sht. Then the author tries to use the correct terms? For the Got vers making it even more complex and difficult to read. Things like 5 name days have passed, this type of dialect
ennit, like **** making it way more complex than it has to be...
The mc is being way too biased towards him no? All we have seen is him helping this one guy get everything before everyone... He got a harder mission that made him broken, he got equipment made for cheap af bc mc helped him, he is now being made an apprentice before it is even relaced.... It's kinda turning into a joke tbh... this other guy isnt the mc. So why is he getting everything like an mc while others just sit and watch? It would have been much more interesting if a new char got the apprenticeship. Plus it doesn't even suit a hunter to specialise in blacksmithing. I cant rly say this enough... it's annoying how your constantly making him more and more broken like an mc. I mean even Athena, she has had no help so far. All that was given was taking away some power so she doesn't blow up and die... compare it and it's honestly a joke that he is helping this random ass dude so much... I get you may like him as a character, but this isnt about him. Its about our mc... I guess it's too late now as this happened ages ago. However, does this continue? Cause I'll prob drop if so. Ive already said it but I just can't read about this guy getting constant cheats throughout the story.
I don't get why everyone loves this howler guy? He has been an arrogant prick so far. Confidence is fine, I love seeing that. However, what has been shown so far is not confidence, it's arrogance with a sad backstory to make him more likeable. I mean she was nice to him etc and then he instantly ignores this because he feels she was commenting that he wasn't strong. He then challenges her ignoring her gestures and insults her... He has an inferior complex and tries to not show it by being arrogant.
I think this has been great up till now and the only downer so far is the whole ai thing. I feel it was taken way to far he needed to be able to kill her with a thought to trust her? He should be smart enough to not fall into the human fear of ai... Like literally in every story involving an Ai betraying its creator there was always a reason for it. He should have the confidence in himself to not make that mistake. I understand the initial fear, however it shouldn't have got to the point it did. (where he would be able to kill her with a thought for trust)
and do I need to remind you that in every movie, tv show, book etc it is always human's fear that brings this? It's fear that they're to smart for us and are alive... its the most popular si-fi troupe so of course it will always betray the creator as that is what we make it do...
Just checked on dis and damn I didn't realise that kate was bastion's wife. When you put his wife I thought you were talking about the mc... xD
Tbh I rly like ava. Plus if the mc is going to be travelling everywhere like he is, I feel that he needs ava with him. Someone to talk to, someone who would never betray him. Plus someone to care for him. I mean if you think of sentient ai then why do they go bad? usually, it's always the fault in how they are made/treated. Like with ultron he had the mind stone mess with him and was exposed to the internet where it saw loads of fcked up sht. Fear of it is something that makes it increase the chance. With the mc, with how smart he is he should understand this and trust in himself that he has done everything right.
Hopefully, this won't turn out to be a massive ass harem book. Rly enjoying it so far. I mean he has kate? Idk who that is, is there a picture anywhere? and then he has Konan and Irene. That's already three so all good. ^^ They all seem strong-willed as well. For the fruit, as someone else said it would make sense for it to be either the paper fruit or enchant fruit. Adding onto this, they all already have there own moves, power etc so you don't need to waste time and only modify a little or none at all to fit with this world
who is this? an oc?
100% every time the mc peruses it, I swear it starts to go downhill. They never think of the consequences. I agree if he could eventually travel the multiverse then its all good, it would still be sht but at least you won't be bored and can interact with people. Just thinking about staying on one planet forever on your own... damn you would want to kill yourself eventually but then you can't because your immortal..