The wait begins :(

The fight scene was okay a bit crude in the way it started, if you explained he was in a trance or built up towards it it would of been fine, it felt a bit sudden (the initial engagement) every time something serious occurs try to build up momentum and you’ll do fine :)

Honestly loved the book and your fanfic. I would recommend you improving the grammer over time

Cheers for the chapters :)

Great chapter

Highly recommend reading this fanfic. The author knows a lot about the show and portrays all the characters in the best way possible. He even got Sheldon’s speech and personality right and that’s hard to comprehend hahaha. Again give it a try and stop reading this review you lazy ass :)

Take my stones

Great novel, power stones are coming when they refresh can’t wait to travel this journey with you boss

Great chapter

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter :)

Awesome fight and chapter, truly outdid yourself

Thanks for the chapter

😂😂😂 you probably could and it would be seen as a valid response

Hey Author thank you for the updates, I do hope the grammer and translation improve because it’s becoming harder to follow the story the flow is broken so far

The novel shows promise with a strong plot and engaging characters, but it faces a significant hurdle that could deter readers from making it halfway. The grammar is notably subpar, with occasional translations feeling poorly executed, and the overall writing flow lacking coherence. Reading becomes a challenge, requiring constant effort. To truly shine, the novel needs thorough editing. It would be beneficial if the translator considers utilizing external tools like Grammarly for improvement.

That’s her personality in the show though

Thanks for the update get well soon

Thanks for the chapter, the grammar and flow could use more improvement but so far enjoying the plot