Good story, character development is decent but if he's only goal is to get stronger are more famous it will start to get boring, would be good to think about it. i mean at the point where the actual line of DC starts he will be (most likely) an apex being so everything would become blank and bland, i suppose a romance part or something else that could make the story progress in more than just one way would be great. Thanks for the hard work by the way
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