Trapped for Eternity

Awesome work Author...👏👏👏 I really want to recommend to give it a one try...Writing is good. You have the hold on your story very well 👍👍 kudos to author. Keep up the good work author. All the best for future 👍👍👍

I love how the settings and characters are described with such detail that it is easy for readers to imagine them. The story's writing and pace flow smoothly; there are no jarring breaks that would make the story unpleasant. Overall, this work is shaping up to be a great read, and I'm looking forward to see where it goes!!

The story is well written and has a very serious tone throughout so far. The setting is interesting and there's been a lot of build up so far for future events. My only criticism so far is the lack of show not tell. Several emotions that were outright stated could be implied instead with descriptions of facial expressions for instance.

Currently at chapter 11 and rethinking reading the rest. I listed a 5 star review, I'll update later depending on if it heads further south. The ages in this are a little too broad. Alistair (king /male lead) has been on the throne 16 years , based on how he's portrayed he took that throne as an ***** so he's a minimum of 36 years (if we're being generous) Eleanor ( cringy girl in love with the king, trying to marry Alistair) is 17 turning 18 in a few weeks. The "angel" Samantha/ ACTUAL female lead /green eyes girl who the king is actively searching for was born within a year of him ascending the throne so she's 16 at most, right now. Which also means she hasn't had her coming of age either (18 yrs). ML is old enough to be her dad. So will there be a period of time that passes or is the male lead really about to pursue a 16 year old when he's a middle aged man? Historically older rulers took on younger brides, misstreses etc, but this gives off a kind of predatory precursor to the story? I'm at chapter 11 and it makes me reconsider reading the rest. hoping this gets cleared and maybe my math is off or the author allows the upcoming female lead to mature more.

I love the MLs character. Straight forward but very sarcastic 😉.. The story is yet to progress but till now it is going good. With slight editing the story will be perfect.. good work author

So far, very good. The author has a good handle on writing, and the quality is quite high. The premise is unique and I like the world which the author has created. This story has a lot of potential, and is probably going to develop into something very great. Keep writing, author!

Simply wow... I have just read up to the second chapter and I already like this book. The details, description, dialogue... Everything is on point. Hehhe, I like the characters as well. Good writing style I must say. My only complain would be for author to cut down on the text in her paragraphs for easier read. Esp since you are explaining some things about the kingdom and all. So readers don't get lost but can grasp it all. I have already added this book to my library and voted. I look forward to more updates from author. Good luck with d WPC.

Well another awesome book from our darling author. If you've read her previous books, you would know this one also has potential. I think this is author's first fantasy... I am thrilled to see where it would lead. Its just starting but it can keep u in place to read on. As a co-competetor and author, I can say, nice settings and great writing. Keep it up author-chan.

So we have a well writen story, check! We have interesting charecters, check! We have an interesting setting, also check! Honestly Author you got something good here the only downside of this is but one Only two chapters as of now, but i will be coming back for more for sure!

The synopsis got me good there! Such a fascinating way to start the adventure-a romantical adventure! As I read the novel, I notice that the setting of the story was well depicted by the author. Not only that it captivated me, and othe readers, but it also explains alot about multiple happenings, plus with the rich personalities of every characters!

This is the second novel I have read from this author and so far I'm impressed . The story is totally different from the first one and this shows your versitality as a writer. The storyline is intriguing and I would like to see where it goes. Please don't abandon this novel it has potential. You are a talented writer and keep on sharing your talent with us readers ❤️❤️❤️❤️

nice story author you are a great writer keep on your work we can say it's a beautiful story with beggining so please d see grammetical work what we will do

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Great story so far, i havent gotten that far Into it yet but its really good so far, cant wait to keep reading❤️💖 jehenssndbjejsskkskejejenebeb