Trapped for Eternity

Awesome work Author...👏👏👏 I really want to recommend to give it a one try...Writing is good. You have the hold on your story very well 👍👍 kudos to author. Keep up the good work author. All the best for future 👍👍👍

I love how the settings and characters are described with such detail that it is easy for readers to imagine them. The story's writing and pace flow smoothly; there are no jarring breaks that would make the story unpleasant. Overall, this work is shaping up to be a great read, and I'm looking forward to see where it goes!!

The synopsis got me good there! Such a fascinating way to start the adventure-a romantical adventure! As I read the novel, I notice that the setting of the story was well depicted by the author. Not only that it captivated me, and othe readers, but it also explains alot about multiple happenings, plus with the rich personalities of every characters!

The story is well written and has a very serious tone throughout so far. The setting is interesting and there's been a lot of build up so far for future events. My only criticism so far is the lack of show not tell. Several emotions that were outright stated could be implied instead with descriptions of facial expressions for instance.

I'm so hooked on your storyline Your characters are amazing can't get enough of the story... I need more.. want more please give us more!!!

Such a beautiful story ❤❤ The slow build up on their love is captivating and makes getting to the relationship seem real. 🥰🥰 I am excited to see where it goes 💏

Nice book,interesting,it going to be fun reading this book,thanks a lot author for this book,it one of my best books🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 keep it up

love the book and the MC he is just an amazing king with great abilities.... his character is remarkble kudos writer well done [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

Great story! Once you start reading it, the plot, the carefully designed characters and the fantastic story structure just makes you fall in love with it. Can't wait to read/see what will happen next! Talented writer! Keep up the good work!

You are doing an amazing job with this book! I love it so far! Though I do wish that it would update more. It will be a great romance! Keep up the good work!

This is the second novel I have read from this author and so far I'm impressed . The story is totally different from the first one and this shows your versitality as a writer. The storyline is intriguing and I would like to see where it goes. Please don't abandon this novel it has potential. You are a talented writer and keep on sharing your talent with us readers ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Currently at chapter 11 and rethinking reading the rest. I listed a 5 star review, I'll update later depending on if it heads further south. The ages in this are a little too broad. Alistair (king /male lead) has been on the throne 16 years , based on how he's portrayed he took that throne as an ***** so he's a minimum of 36 years (if we're being generous) Eleanor ( cringy girl in love with the king, trying to marry Alistair) is 17 turning 18 in a few weeks. The "angel" Samantha/ ACTUAL female lead /green eyes girl who the king is actively searching for was born within a year of him ascending the throne so she's 16 at most, right now. Which also means she hasn't had her coming of age either (18 yrs). ML is old enough to be her dad. So will there be a period of time that passes or is the male lead really about to pursue a 16 year old when he's a middle aged man? Historically older rulers took on younger brides, misstreses etc, but this gives off a kind of predatory precursor to the story? I'm at chapter 11 and it makes me reconsider reading the rest. hoping this gets cleared and maybe my math is off or the author allows the upcoming female lead to mature more.

Great story so far, i havent gotten that far Into it yet but its really good so far, cant wait to keep reading❤️💖 jehenssndbjejsskkskejejenebeb

I love the MLs character. Straight forward but very sarcastic 😉.. The story is yet to progress but till now it is going good. With slight editing the story will be perfect.. good work author

So far, very good. The author has a good handle on writing, and the quality is quite high. The premise is unique and I like the world which the author has created. This story has a lot of potential, and is probably going to develop into something very great. Keep writing, author!

Simply wow... I have just read up to the second chapter and I already like this book. The details, description, dialogue... Everything is on point. Hehhe, I like the characters as well. Good writing style I must say. My only complain would be for author to cut down on the text in her paragraphs for easier read. Esp since you are explaining some things about the kingdom and all. So readers don't get lost but can grasp it all. I have already added this book to my library and voted. I look forward to more updates from author. Good luck with d WPC.

Well another awesome book from our darling author. If you've read her previous books, you would know this one also has potential. I think this is author's first fantasy... I am thrilled to see where it would lead. Its just starting but it can keep u in place to read on. As a co-competetor and author, I can say, nice settings and great writing. Keep it up author-chan.

So we have a well writen story, check! We have interesting charecters, check! We have an interesting setting, also check! Honestly Author you got something good here the only downside of this is but one Only two chapters as of now, but i will be coming back for more for sure!

I'm loving this story...all the characters are beautifully described and I'm on the edge of my seat wondering what will happen next...well done author! [img=recommend][img=recommend]

Nice book,interesting,nice begging,.I love this book.I recommend it for everyone.Keep it up author,thanks alot for this book,it one of my favorite books