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Moipone_Modise
Moipone_ModiseLv114yr
2021-01-10 05:26

This is the second novel I have read from this author and so far I'm impressed . The story is totally different from the first one and this shows your versitality as a writer. The storyline is intriguing and I would like to see where it goes. Please don't abandon this novel it has potential. You are a talented writer and keep on sharing your talent with us readers ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Trapped for Eternity

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Scarlettheartt
ScarletthearttLv10

Awesome work Author...👏👏👏 I really want to recommend to give it a one try...Writing is good. You have the hold on your story very well 👍👍 kudos to author. Keep up the good work author. All the best for future 👍👍👍

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spicyscribbles
spicyscribblesLv2

I love how the settings and characters are described with such detail that it is easy for readers to imagine them. The story's writing and pace flow smoothly; there are no jarring breaks that would make the story unpleasant. Overall, this work is shaping up to be a great read, and I'm looking forward to see where it goes!!

4yr
kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3

The synopsis got me good there! Such a fascinating way to start the adventure-a romantical adventure! As I read the novel, I notice that the setting of the story was well depicted by the author. Not only that it captivated me, and othe readers, but it also explains alot about multiple happenings, plus with the rich personalities of every characters!

4yr
SnowPenguin
SnowPenguinLv3

The story is well written and has a very serious tone throughout so far. The setting is interesting and there's been a lot of build up so far for future events. My only criticism so far is the lack of show not tell. Several emotions that were outright stated could be implied instead with descriptions of facial expressions for instance.

4yr
Maria_Campos_0293
Maria_Campos_0293Lv14

I'm so hooked on your storyline Your characters are amazing can't get enough of the story... I need more.. want more please give us more!!!

3yr
DaoisteMIWOt
DaoisteMIWOtLv4

Reveal spoiler

2yr
McDrea_0910
McDrea_0910Lv15

Such a beautiful story ❤❤ The slow build up on their love is captivating and makes getting to the relationship seem real. 🥰🥰 I am excited to see where it goes 💏

3yr
Omoroge_grace
Omoroge_graceLv3

Nice book,interesting,it going to be fun reading this book,thanks a lot author for this book,it one of my best books🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 keep it up

3yr
NickyPbb
NickyPbbLv3

love the book and the MC he is just an amazing king with great abilities.... his character is remarkble kudos writer well done [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

3yr
Lilly21
Lilly21Lv12

Great story! Once you start reading it, the plot, the carefully designed characters and the fantastic story structure just makes you fall in love with it. Can't wait to read/see what will happen next! Talented writer! Keep up the good work!

3yr
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