Reviews of Towards Godhood [Hiatus again]

Interesting story, but the writing is bad, as in grammar. You should revise it your self, or get an editor/reviser. I like the story so far, but every time I read your writing I'm thinking of ways that could of been fixed, and it just annoys me.

Although the story supports a good storyline, the execution has room for improvement. Although I noted the writing quality to gradually improve in more recent chapters, I must confess that I find the characters themselves to be rather lacking. While the story does not lack character growth, I often don’t feel compassionate towards the characters because I still don’t feel as if I know them. They feel as characters in the making rather than established persona. And while the author seems to have a clear idea of them, as a reader I feel as if I cannot truly grasp them. Grammar wise there are some faults, but since I have been known to wrestle with this myself, I understand your struggles completely.

I tried, I seriously tried till chap 182 but I still find the mc to be worst and story plotting to be far too lacking, everywhere girls with weird fetishes, some normal but no character development till now and an idiotic god who want to have fun...Now I think it's fun dropping this novel at this point

I 'm sure it is unfair to judge your hard work only after reading only six chapters. That being said, I made some remarques that I like to share with you: Firstly, the story so far is good as a whole, but you need to do a lot of editing because it's tedious to read your writing. secondly, You need to redo your outline of events so it becomes clearer to follow. thirdly, you worked so hard at this so at least redo the synopsis and first chapter. good luck!

Alright I stopped reading at chapter six because the story development was very good so I wanted to read slowly to enjoy it more I didn't want to rush it because of a review swap chapter 1 and two were slow going but the moment the chapter 3 started i was hooked of course there are some very confusing lines and grammar mistakes in the novel i think it can be ignored. I hope there is no harem or Xiao Fan turns into a guardian who saves everyone and being a goody two shoes, the one thig i wanted to share with the author is try to describe the world around the mc what he feels or whats he plans to do to make it more interesting and show the readers rather than telling which is only a tiny bit minus i could find. Overall its a great novel, for a general reader like me this novel is a good read and i hope author wouldn't drop the novel due to lack of attention because this novel has the potential to reach higher level

It's not bad and It's not good, pretty average. I mean your grammar is pretty average. But a nice and interesting story covers it up. Keep up the good work!

Just meh. Not really interesting, plot just missed as I thought it was boring. Meh meh meh boring omg 140 characters suck but good luck . Need no need for a new job and then I have a lot to wear to work with me tomorrow so I’ll

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the nice and simple story...little grammatical mistakes..except that...good background and characterization...........................................